TheUnderRated vs. Metaphysik

[TheUnderRated]

15-20 lines
1 hour
blindspit
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normal rules.............elevated sleeps..............dicks................

[TheUnderRated]

my bad new rules 5 bars
i spit verse
feed off me and you will catch cancer cuase the flow is disaterous........................................ ..

[.Mack.]

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[TheUnderRated]

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[TheUnderRated]

Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........

[.Mack.]

Aight check it

Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//

Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//

Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//

Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//

Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//



2nd bar: lucky charms...bad luck

[High Class]

rated - This was an alright verse, kinda week from what you brought to battles befor. You had good flow, and good structure. I liked a couple of punches in there, could have used some personals. You had some alright word play as well...


Meta- You aso had an alright verse. There was a nice flow, and all of that. I dont like it when // is put at the end of lines though. I liked your word-play, and the creativity. But alot of punches could have hit harder from my perspective.

Vote - Meta

Conclusion
I didnt like the opener and the closer of rateds verse. that really threw me off. You could have came with better punches, both of you could have accually. But I think Meta just hit harder with it...

( Please return the favor an honest vote on the battles in my sig )

[.Mack.]

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[ILLunatic]

Damn.... Close shit...

Punches-Tie
Wordplay-metaphysik
Vocab-TheUnderRated
Enjoyable-metaphysik
Multies-Neither
Structure-Tie

Vote-Metaphysik
He edged it out..
I thought TheUnderRated had it
But Metaphysik surprised me with that comeback
Props to both of you
But Metaphysik gets my vote....


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102163

[.Mack.]

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[Phoeniix]

i think Meta took this one...because he came more raw. underrated....u came good...u just didnt focus enough on just hitting cleverly...seemed like u wanted to get "scientific" and forcing complex vocabulary..plus your close was kind of giving up i think when ur like "merk me sometime again"

even tho i like UR's structure better...i think Meta took this since his punches were more aggressive. some clever concepts and some pretty cool metas were included in his veres as well..

good battle.

my vote: Meta

i took the time to vote on this, so hit this up honestly both of you please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103318

[Phoeniix]

wont let me poll? do u have to register for elite?? i have over 5 wins....so what do i do to register? anyways anybody who sees this can see i have over 5 wins....so i can vote. but i guess im not registerd to pol. so wahtever. i'll figure it out...

hit up my battle tho

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103318