Lyrical Terrorism

[~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~]

Damani-DaGrinch - tryin to get signed
Termz - I remember
Kosha fo Passova - keepin it kosha
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Just something I whipped up,there was more but only posted the shit i liked best.

AYO
I murder tracks wit phat raps and verbal attacks
lyricly smack yo mind wit rhymes till its purple and black
Its a fact,east to west the rest know who the best is
test this.. and get a fist through yo solar plexus
I throw low blows and sever wrists,rap terrorist
My flow squash and dismiss any lyricist that exist
I let the pump dump on any chump that front
the only chick I hump is the one wit a thick rump
A savage out for cabage so mics I ravage
my vintage lyrical carnage givin u brain damage
I got insane styles when I spray rhymes
Im sayin bye if u aint fine cause I only lay dymes
And MCs fear my squad,cause big or small,we rip'em all
Kick it raw and watch all yall jaws drop in awe
My crew dont do drive-bys,we do rhyme-bys
cause 15 seconds is all I need to lyricly fry guys!

Hit me wit some honest feedback ~1~

[LoCo]

this was pretty dope.. first 2 lines were coo
I liked the imagery, the first 2 were the best 2 me
keep spittin

[Rage1]

crazy spit!... nice drop man good flow...


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[~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~]

Yo so Plz vote on this shit after u done here,we need mad votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101944

[Mistral]

Rage Dont Post Links To Other Sites, Link Doesnt Work But Dont Do It.

And you need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

[~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~]

thanx for the reminder C ~1~

[~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~]

more more more more more feedback cmon people cmooooooon feeeeeeeeeedbaaaaaaaaaaaaaack................

[High Class]

^ need to post 3 links befor it gets closed ^

-- It was alright. I liked the word usage, but im not feeling the topic. To many people talk about them selves. That doesnt show much talent from my perspective. You had alright structure, a consisitant flow, but it was just to simple. No hate hommie, you showed alot of potential right here... Keep Elevatin
Rate - 6.5 / 10

[~CeRtiFieD~]

its aight, nowt special...............easy to read, but te structure needed to b polished, especially at the end of each line. I dint know wether to hold on a word, or read onto the next lines.
I liked reading it though, im lookin forward to see-ing sum of ya other sh*t.....aight peace....

feedback!!!!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102059 mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Antonio Banderas]

Originally posted by High Class
^ need to post 3 links befor it gets closed ^

-- It was alright. I liked the word usage, but im not feeling the topic. To many people talk about them selves. That doesnt show much talent from my perspective. You had alright structure, a consisitant flow, but it was just to simple. No hate hommie, you showed alot of potential right here... Keep Elevatin
Rate - 6.5 / 10

I agree with this feedback. I liked your piece. U need to drop something longer though.... Keep dropping em dogg....

[Echo]

You had really good punches. Like the one about drive bys and rhyme bys. That is somethin' I haven't heard before. Good drop.

[MD_killa]

^^^^^^
peeps should be banned for ish like this
(there is no such thing as a punch in a topical)

but yo LJ ish was nice dunny fa sho, like the usage of words an the way you played ya concept... good drop but yeah longer would be better .... hahaha

~MD Knows~

Caesar - On3

[young mike]

that shit was bangin as fuck hit my hail mary up

[young mike]

yo can join our crew dawg your mad nice holla at me