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PaDDyMan
~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~
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deadline 2 hours after check in so spit somethin hot out
ok I check in right now------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3:12 California TIME PM---------------------------------------------------------------------------if anyone gives a fuck HERE I GO---------------------------------------------------------------------
All I get from these forum niggaz is HATE VOTES,
it seems that PaDDy be their new favorite SCAPEGOAT,
You take Details and talk shit thinkin thats your STYLE,
nah nigga you just tryin to be Eminem in Eight MILE,
After this battle u gonna take such a great respect LOSS,
You could get money back at the end of the year with tax write OFFS,
Ill stick my pistol up your ass causing rectal PAINS,
pull the trigger and now u got Shit for BRAINS,
just call this bitch Aladdin cuz he found a lamp and made 3 death WISHES,
you shouldve asked to win this battle, now you be swimmin wit the wanksta FISHES,
you couldnt step up to me if you had a stair MASTER,
i spit so much cum on you, people think you be workin with PLASTER
Lyrical Jezuz swings and MISSES,
strike 3 and hes all out of DISSES,
he thinks of lyrics while he takes a leak; FUCK did I SPOIL IT?,
No wonder this kids lyrics sound like shit, they from the TOILET.
Explanations -- ScapeGoat = Someone who takes shit from people who are angry and gets their problems blamed onto them
Plaster = white shit used alot in Art classrooms for making stuff, it always speckles on peoples clothes like a cum shot
Hes got shit for brains now cause I shot him through the ass into the brain now the shit from his ass is now in his head, GET IT?
As for the ending, he thinks of lyrics while hes going to the bathroom, so i used the metaphor that his lyrics are SHIT(poopoo) because he gets his ideas while hes in the bathroom
WHATEVER
hey TOX if ur gonna rip my verse apart, at least be POSITIVE about it and tell of my GOOD POINTS not only my flaws damnit
Paddy kept challenging sending PMs..... askin-me for a chance
He knows if he keeps analyzing mine....his rhyme skill might finally enhance
But reality is,this kid ....will never have any higher skills
When he spits...peeps evacuate quick like kids practising fire drills
This diss is so precise...I could hit lice one by one of-a-chimp
But yo punches alot like yo dick...casue they ALLWAYS soft-n-limp
I think paddyman....and picture a slow frog-faced homo
Send yo photo 2 uglypeople.com...they'll probly pay 2 use it as their logo
Challengin me is a no-no....you should be battlin poets
Cause u flood the forum wit more whack shit then overflowin toilets
Im beggin you......just think about who you steppin to
Cause u gon be jus another MC I had no problem rippin thru
(peace)
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Paddyman
First off, dont capatalize the end of your bars &..
Dont seperate them all individually..looks herbish..
Content wise your verse lacked alot..
Vocabulairy is a small thing you can add..without..
Alot of practice just a sensable mind..
As for punches, personals u hardly had any &..
That 8mile line was wack aswell as played..
Work on your structure to..
Overall Weak.
Lyrical Jezus
Alot, lot better verse.
You actually produced some punches & even a personal.
You had a better structure, n far less played concepts..
You pretty much had the upper hand in all catagories.
Work on your wordplay though..you seemed to miss it.
Overall Decent-Good.
vote: Lyrical Jezus..
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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START VOTING OR PADDYMAN GON COMMIT SUICIDE!!!!!!!!!
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jus playin i don think hed kill himself lol
haha lyrical jesus got this..
PaDDy, you was kinda not dissing him, in ya opener you wuz 2 off topic with your opponent that I lost interest and expected the rest of your verse as predictable' ..anyways, Lyrical. In my opinion was clever with his..the fire drill line had me crackin up..lol it was worded and delivered well with a very few personals alond side punchlines..good, overall I vote lyrical..
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