i set up
you spit first
10 lines
usual rules
no d/r etc etc
PennyWise
alias
i set up
you spit first
10 lines
usual rules
no d/r etc etc
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Due In An Hour
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i didnt say a time limit but i will drop as soon as i can............................................... ...........................................
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style outdated, cant grasp moderness, like peeps wearin sandals,
get a 'grip', you couldnt 'hold' me back if i was born with 'handles',
im aint a 'psychic', but theres no need to foretell your 'wackness',
yous never gonna get the fire, cos u've jus started losin 'matches',
hate to deal with loose change, but 'penny's aint 'wise' battlin me,
why do herbs find my range, an step forwards for thier first defeat
you must not be in your proper mind by tryin to drop a ill rhyme,
becoz the hot lines in ya verses equal the same as a dollar sign's,
stand down, you couldnt elevate, if u was jury, risin in court rooms
well, i never expected, to type so quick, an merk pennywise so soon,
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Denying-Ya-Fame, I'm Rhymin'-Wit-Lames, Ya Skill Equalz 0 Like Capitalizes-In-Ya-Name
Ya Behind-In-Da-Game, Blinded-By-Pain, Ya Like Pics Of Gay Sex, U Like Gayz-In-Ya-Frame
My Fists Fold-In-Ya-Cheek, Like Photo's Of Anerexics Alias Just Showin-He's-Weak
Ya Flows-Ain't-Unique, I'll B Wise N Show U Ya Biggest Mistake By Exposing-This-Link
Spit Heat-Verbs, Along Wit Deep-Wordz.. But Like Atanta Teams Alias Is A Weak-Bird
Don't Seek-Wordz, I'll Defeat-Nerdz, Ur A Herb!! Like Faults In Tennis You'll Get Served
Wise Known To Jack-Dudes, This Battles Far From Opinions Cuz Its A Fact-You'll-Lose
Snap Ya Back-In-Two Cuz Alias Is Prone To Suck More Then Daily Used Vacuum-Tubes
Smash Faggots-Wit-Ease, My Punches Will Scar Ya Mind Wit A Traumatic-Disease
Once The Matic-Is-Squeezed, I'll Have Ya Thinkin U Out Of Breath Like Asthmatic-Beliefs
Uppin For Votes.. Nice Verse Alias
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aiight that link you has provided,
is
1- spamming
2- biting
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so maybe you will be banned????
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Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias
Punches: Alias
Personals: Penny
Flow: Close but Alias
Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer)
Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches...
aiight well...........................uppin.............. ...drop a fair vote.........an a link.........................
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2cnd time uppin............................................. ...................bump..............bump......... .bump....................................
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ok i dont have 100 posts but i gotta say vote:alias
better flow better puches jus all round better
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ok look here's the deal......
you don't bold your whole battle or any of it for that matter...it get's really stupid and makes people not even want to read it-
wit that said......
penny wise u tore the multi's up....but thats it...other wise ur verse lacked punches flo-meti's and structure for that matter....the style is wak...kill-the-dashes-all-over-the-place...
overall....alias came in witta better battle verse along with alot funnier an wittier wordplay and stronger vocab...his structure was much better and flo on key.....overall he murked this kid-
my vote- alias......penny learn and elevate....view other battles
[quote]Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias
Punches: Alias
Personals: Penny
Flow: Close but Alias
Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer)
Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches...[quote]
sonned.... teh closer was a lil played an alaias came harder
battle was aightish
alias..who are you?? jus wonderin
penny had right idea but dint deliver
BREAKDOWN
punches-a
flow-a
Structure-a
enjoyment-both
multis-Penny
sustainment-A
complexity-p
wordplay-a
overall-Alias
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
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YEP PEEP THE LINK PLZ ONE OF YA'LL..........................
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