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  1. #1
    yog_dogg
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    Back in jail

    yo check this

    as i sit in my cell
    laughing at my self saying what the hell/
    how did i land back in jail
    how the fuck am i supposed to make bail/
    i hate when i get thrown behind bars
    the food here is shit, eatin this food out of mothefuckin jars/
    ths guards here have no respect, ust cause we have no glock
    If they was on my turf they'd get smacked across the block/
    they dont know how it was growin up like shit
    hell i bet they cant even take a fuckin hit/
    i could take all u mothefuckers our wit one punch
    Shit! i bet u couldnt make it passed they day wit out lunch/
    Fuck this jail i will pray and kneel
    you know what, i'm busin out i'm ona break this steel/
    Alright enough wit this flow i gotta jet
    oh yeah when i get out u a dead man if u dnt pay ur debt/


    i'm out...

  2. #2
    gotaloveforrap
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    i thought that shit was aight dude. the last line was probably the best in my opinion, but anyway the flow was ok it could still elevate a little, the wordplay and vocab were ok, they too could probably elevate, but for a newbie ur alright, keep postin and elevatin, that was pretty good.

    peace.....

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