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Foul
Smurk856
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Nerd. Ur verse against phlem made me facepalm
I can guarantee no one reddit so stop stayin on that site all day long
I keep my gun polished,ull b a sworn eye witness
All my shots register cleaner,u just use that to destroy ur porn viruses
Im holdin 3 stacks while u stay at home
Yea u have 3G too but its cuz ur too broke to update ur phone
Chicks come to my office space to give this cock a taste
No bitch wants to see smurk so wipe that shitty look off ya face
My keys help noobs get demolished quicker ,bein honest nigga
Its obvious that smurnoff so when u lose dont blame it on the liquor
I rub semen on big breasts for u its all a dream
Cuz If S cum on a chest hes wearin a superman costume for holloween
Ur bars lookin ugly cat,now get fuckin slapped
All my punches r textbook but judging by ur skill online u better study that
I receive g mail, packs of yak & u can bet its not the bull
When u receive g mail a dick pops up on the screen wen ur inbox is full
Battling is what I do I love gettin those stunnin wows
But U want so many fuckin bars its like u own an empire of sex clubs u clown
Now im just slayin u for havin dicks in comfort time
I know this kid wannted beef but I didnt expect him to suck on mine
"Chrome 4 5 singin cuz they still snitchin
Pools in da livin room, swim to the kitchen"
"Chrome 4 5 singin cuz they still snitchin
Pools in da livin room, swim to the kitchen"
Smurk A Laid you Down Like a Hoe after a cheap Date/
1st Plate Beef I'll Cook Him He's Well Done Burnt Face/
Expose The Fake Catfish This Pussy Stink/
sabertooth this Pussy extinct/
BARS Smurk Go Got Great Aim Gambit With Cards/
I Bust Early virgin Discharge/
Giving out Bodies the Ref Would call this A Charge/
Your Like Incest You should of never Took it this Far/
And If We Spar My Hands Will Give you This Work/
A Lux's Job this Hollow will Bring your dad out To Check For his Son/
I'm The Bar Beast Bruce Banner Behind Bars/
So if i See Green I'll force this Hulk-(Hawk) out That will rip threw your Car/
Your Subpar Bars are Basically BASIC/
Rob to Eat I live in That Mask - era No Make Up To receive a Face lift /
Time For personals These Hands Swing at Monoply that's a Personal Foul/
Fouls Stupid Spelled (MONOPLY) wrong Put a Hole in you where it belong,
That how you spell Monop(O)ly Wow/
Remember I Hate Board Games in this Murder case I will use as my Defense/
Monoply the Name Make sense "Get out of Jail Free Card" That's FOUL Play Snitch/
Your life a Glitch your dad see you as a regrettable boner/
If you Wanna Tango I'm DJango to you Sterling I Kill off all type of Owners/
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Nerd. Ur verse against phlem made me facepalm
I can guarantee no one reddit so stop stayin on that site all day long
ehh good concept but bad execution
I keep my gun polished,ull b a sworn eye witness
All my shots register cleaner,u just use that to destroy ur porn viruses
lol cool
Im holdin 3 stacks while u stay at home
Yea u have 3G too but its cuz ur too broke to update ur phone
nah this wasnt very hard
Chicks come to my office space to give this cock a taste
No bitch wants to see smurk so wipe that shitty look off ya face
not really feelin this. could of done more with his name
My keys help noobs get demolished quicker ,bein honest nigga
Its obvious that smurnoff so when u lose dont blame it on the liquor
good try but super forced
I rub semen on big breasts for u its all a dream
Cuz If S cum on a chest hes wearin a superman costume for holloween
cool flip
Ur bars lookin ugly cat,now get fuckin slapped
All my punches r textbook but judging by ur skill online u better study that
haha good
I receive g mail, packs of yak & u can bet its not the bull
When u receive g mail a dick pops up on the screen wen ur inbox is full
nahh
Battling is what I do I love gettin those stunnin wows
But U want so many fuckin bars its like u own an empire of sex clubs u clown
ehh not really man
Now im just slayin u for havin dicks in comfort time
I know this kid wannted beef but I didnt expect him to suck on mine
no homo. bad closer
vs.
Smurk A Laid you Down Like a Hoe after a cheap Date/
1st Plate Beef I'll Cook Him He's Well Done Burnt Face/
pause.
Expose The Fake Catfish This Pussy Stink/
sabertooth this Pussy extinct/
no weak
BARS Smurk Go Got Great Aim Gambit With Cards/
I Bust Early virgin Discharge/
no
Giving out Bodies the Ref Would call this A Charge/
Your Like Incest You should of never Took it this Far/
wack and played
And If We Spar My Hands Will Give you This Work/
A Lux's Job this Hollow will Bring your dad out To Check For his Son/
good job rhyming. [/sarcasm]
I'm The Bar Beast Bruce Banner Behind Bars/
So if i See Green I'll force this Hulk-(Hawk) out That will rip threw your Car/
this could of been good but you had horrible wording
Your Subpar Bars are Basically BASIC/
Rob to Eat I live in That Mask - era No Make Up To receive a Face lift /
[B]good wordplay but not a diss/B]
Time For personals These Hands Swing at Monoply that's a Personal Foul/
Fouls Stupid Spelled (MONOPLY) wrong Put a Hole in you where it belong,
That how you spell Monop(O)ly Wow/
nah this was weak
Remember I Hate Board Games in this Murder case I will use as my Defense/
Monoply the Name Make sense "Get out of Jail Free Card" That's FOUL Play Snitch/
you gotta rhyme your bars man
Your life a Glitch your dad see you as a regrettable boner/
If you Wanna Tango I'm DJango to you Sterling I Kill off all type of Owners/
nah bad closer
I keep my gun polished,ull b a sworn eye witness
All my shots register cleaner,u just use that to destroy ur porn viruses
Ur bars lookin ugly cat,now get fuckin slapped
All my punches r textbook but judging by ur skill online u better study that
I rub semen on big breasts for u its all a dream
Cuz If S cum on a chest hes wearin a superman costume for holloween
vs..
no punches
vote - foul
lyricalz finest
vsOriginally Posted by Foul
first guy seems like he has got the basics down but needs to work on wording his material. seems like he struggled to word his concepts which in my opinion killed the impact they potentially had. second guy needs to really work on everything. no need for all the slashes either man. that type of stuff was done on long bar sites back in the beginning of time lol. use your opponents verse as an example of how to structure your verses, concepts and punches man. try to brew up some witty insults and word them in a harsh manner so you try and offend the person you are battling. anyways im just rambling here but at the end of the day, i got foul taking this battle pretty easily.
foul for the win.
1sty guy
I rub semen on big breasts for u its all a dream
Cuz If S cum on a chest hes wearin a superman costume for holloween
Vs
Nothing
Foul tbh if seen better from you. Wording was a bit off but enough to win. Smirk needs allot of work but he's getting his structure down
Just needs to read some of the veteran battles
Vote foul
Foul wins KO. Closed.
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