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    Agenda 21

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    Unfold the signs; control the mind to uphold Mankind
    Cajole the blind, console a crime, crossover the thin-line
    Suppress citizens with duress and magic medicines
    Digest model inventions that boil in intent like Edison
    The real feel oppressed as paedophilic priests hide evidence
    Then confide with sick-headed bastards in conference
    Clash the conscience; smash the confidence
    Hash lifts assassins as aliens trash our continents
    On roads built by Romans holding Omnipotent omens
    Open the seventh seal to reveal horrors unreal
    Chilling the bones, culling those clones, filling your homes
    Propped with propaganda plus slander
    Truth is good for the goose and the Gander
    Military commanders collect loot for loyalty
    Then devils raise their left hands to salute royalty
    Thus, levels expand; land is locked, shocked casualties
    Taste the dust, wasting lust on fake busts and surgeries
    Urgently thrust back-and-forth until concussed
    I morph as such just to touch upon this surface
    Disturbing nervous neurons, the scene is perfect
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    Genetic modifications… generic ratification
    Mass mutation of a pussyfooting population
    From pagans to Prophets - to spilt blood droplets
    Drank from goblets gripped by gremlins and hobbits
    Rocking bad habits, mad savages relish the wreckage
    While society accepts Judges with a fetish for kids
    Mother Nature threats, - now her foetus lays hid
    Living in the middle of Mayhem… - youth’s slay men
    Souls stand condemned; sins bring shame to the Shaman
    Aiming for fame, gaining notorious names
    Political games changed the laws of The Bible
    For Babylon the whore reigns over those that trifles
    Duped by false miracles - folks talk to idols
    Jokes aside – pride guides rebels to routes suicidal
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    Manipulation of masses, brainwash the Atlas
    Microchips slipped under the skin as a practice
    Practical magnets attract fanatical ambits
    Freethinking is banished; governments flip a gambit
    As criminals with white collars - work the nightshift
    These subliminal scripts keep hitting the fan like shit
    Music and film tycoons mix surreal with realistic
    It feels mystic to some-, presumed to be apocalyptic
    Watching pornographic cartoons & soap-opera classics
    A Jurassic park sits in the dark Spartan & ravaged
    Poverty is a crime punished, we’re labelled parasitic
    Looking at a bare table unable to fill dishes
    No fish for the listless; this death-wish is delicious
    Diminishing the populace with hush-hush militias
    It’s

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    Re: Agenda 21

    some real science here.
    the flow was real intricate and blended in with a great sence of acknowledgement
    the story didnt have a binding plot, but i could definitly follow along with it, and the smooth wording brought out a nice emotional. the vocabulary choice was extensive and informed the reader of everything he/she needed to know.
    nice verse, i might post this piece for hof
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    Re: Agenda 21

    thanx for checking it out b

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    Re: Agenda 21

    uhm./.,,,,,,,,,,,,?


    i replied to like 10 pices


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    Re: Agenda 21

    yo this was like a mad rocket scientist wrote this.....dope piece man.............
    nice flow especially and nice wordplay.....you got ill on the wordplay.............
    i could also image like a scientist and then as a sargeant int he army.....for some reason.............i read this piece like 5 times----->thats a dope piece
    .........keep this up and keep elevating......................................... .......
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    Re: Agenda 21

    vocabulary and mutlis were crazy in this one... i definitely felt the word play too ... although i did find myself lost at times from the quick flip to another subject it still pieced together well and im positive it was done like that on purpose... the imagery u bulit upon describing these events was done nicely ... very nice read and seemed to have a good structual flow ... i would of probably made this a lil longer though considering the topic but overall very nice drop ...
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    Re: Agenda 21

    yeah thanx for the lookout f'sho
    yeah thats kinda how my mind works most times. jumping form one thing to the next,,,,,ha

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