yea well, now someone is leaving feed, not just someone, but Darryl- the love of your life. so shut the fuck up
lol
I really liked this dude, it was short and to the point. You actually wrote like a sdrunk person lol which would probably be hard to do unless you were drunk. but yea, this was abstract as shit. I was really feeling some of ths shit you had in here, like that bit irises/clarity, that was dope. This was very very good for a come back piece, and I'm going to be nominating this for hof because I really enjoyed it. I felt your imagery here it was seriously intense, I could see everything happening as I was reading it, and that (unlike a lot of shit I read) really made me get lost in the story and read on. The emotion was dope, and there was a bit of comedy in there too, from what I read, I don't know if you meant it, but there were parts that actually made me laugh, like the 'dittle lunk' part at the end, that was cleverly put into the piece, and those light-hearted parts added to my over all enjoyment of the piece. I think you could have went furthr with the story, and kept it going to make a longer piece, but none the less I was really feeling this. Dope shit dude, keep at it. props man.
keep dropping mate, it'd be good to see you back for good.