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    The Notorious E.N.G. Engivale's Avatar
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    Flowin...from inspiration... 6 AM

    I display talent that's upper echelon--
    What's Up? Elect a Psalm in which
    To state fits when I connect my Spawn...


    From white to black,
    To Race, Taste is my Tongue---
    At night the track is laced
    With obscene spades,
    Abrasion is flung...
    I'm basically done,
    But just now getting started-
    Dear departed-
    My fear is to be
    Reincarnated retarded...

    I slice two even halves into
    Believin' traps-
    They equal one, But people shun
    These freaks and laugh...
    I need a bath...
    To wash the dirt off...
    Heard soft drips of lost scripts,
    ...Proposterous...
    I would hold
    Aloft this Smirnoff...
    Cured cough, the cold is conquered...
    Just stopped my trust,
    To each Father in Us,
    Rub off the Rust from your Copper...
    Ceilings, Pipes, Forget the trite feelings,
    I wish that I liked dealing, Bartering,
    Volunteering, Smiling, Martyring,

    They only Love you after you die...
    Until then you're milked
    Like Genitals filled
    With dye,
    White sperm burned,
    Seeped, Leaked and
    Earned by the Sly...
    Bourbon and Sherm Twig
    in a pig stye..
    The fickle cry, and wonder
    If a participle's right-
    To be placed in a four page
    Even spaced report for their
    Essay tonight...
    Let's play or fight,
    My energy's loosed
    Just give me a reason,
    Strenuously Evenin';
    My excuse is what I
    Use for Faith...

    Fuck sense...
    I'd rather make amends
    With my pretentious Hates...


    Endless plates,
    Unfilled and no nourishment...
    I just spilled my first helping-
    Yea, sure, it's spent
    But money is just the right paper...
    A sum of what I've done for
    A crumb and tithe to my Saviour...
    Lie just to make her
    Out to be what I
    Doubt to see-
    A confident woman with
    Ominous signs
    Of Columnist's lines,
    Runnin' away from Page Three...

    ...They want cover...


    The more gory the story
    The more likely you'd be
    Rightfully on the
    Front Page-
    Lump Rage
    Into a pile of shock and bile,
    Throw up for this
    Presumptuous talk and smile...
    This Cunt's face
    Is making me sick...
    I'm leaving, fuck believing
    That just taking flame to a wick---
    Would make a lighter
    Flicked.
    Either I'm insane... oR i'M tRiCkEd...

    A.I.

    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."


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    A.I.

    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."


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    Re: Flowin...from inspiration... 6 AM

    ^rise^

    A.I.

    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."


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    Re: Flowin...from inspiration... 6 AM

    Engivale...wow!

    I love this one a lot. A lot of emotion and imagery in this. I loved the opening section most. The wording made it easy to follow, but had deep meaning in such a small amount of words. Beacause of the short lines, I find the flow easy and simple, but very nicely put together. Your strength was emotion in this piece, with minor flaws in word choice, but very good regardless. Maybe my second favorite piece by you. Great job Engivale!

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    Re: Flowin...from inspiration... 6 AM

    ^^uppin

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    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."


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