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    "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    "Meaningless Defined"
    By: Nash (First Half) & Baron P. Mortuus (Final)

    her morning starts in mourning, no body knows why
    but the whoring wife lies and sees why she cries
    she breathes behind her eyes, exhausted and dry
    knowing nothing but pain pry’s her veins back to size

    "relax to realize" - a motto from a grandmother
    and a woman's death plunders to save a mans mother

    wondrous other worlds, hurled into unmarked wards
    that less than nothing spark among a far away cord
    and from the edge of a sword, to the trigger of a gun
    the bigger stuff gets, the more we have the fun

    "she has a son, and she's only sixteen - ONLY sixteen
    and a fiend rings the neck of a dyslexic homely scream"


    and this thing in the back of our minds is nothing
    by no means am I bluffing ..we could care less
    because we're careless under this skin like mesh
    we detest anything worthless, and what's best -
    is that the rest of the human problems are put to rest
    we roll this drunken vinyl,
    into one final muscle clinching breath -

    Penny pinching with Hennessey lynching
    Liquor drowning, a golden Nile inching
    Ever closer, never a poser, come closer
    To see me but don’t say I never told ya
    I’m just a paper champion with a paper belt
    A faux fur pelt shielding blows I never felt
    Never dealt a critical card, always a shard
    Of the big apple, the sidekick solemn bard
    The arc which Joan used, abused & fused
    Into a myth, Always the last to include
    Then miss, Miss. Hillary Hilton the whore
    Created VCDS, boot market released DVDS
    Of her & me, a cameraman cleaning the floor
    From after love intimacies & her obscenities
    Only to be fired, tired; torn & ravenous to
    Searching for food; mongrel searching in cue
    All my life I saw myself in luxury, hoes & cars
    Telling mysteries of receiving 9 bullet scars
    Influence by the mainstream rap past its prime
    Now just a low class champ, meaningless defined

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    read up whores, this is our first collab and possibly not the last


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=319448

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    I wasn't entirely sure who I was reading at what point, assuming that Pak was that last lump sum? and nash was the prior? I felt like with Nash, he had a lot of promising starts and approaches, but it seemed like there was deffinately some rust about it. A fair amount of wording and diction was alittle left of center, and it made for a stumbling meter at times. Contectually though, I liked the thoughts you were expressing, and felt like a lot of it was very clever.. the meter and wording just didn't really apeal to me. Pak, now, your style to me has always been up and down.. it's kind of like I have to be in the mood to read one of your pieces, but here, this was just something different. It was actually very reminicent of an older Mindless Om, with the thick meter and occasional line break- very poetic. Everything was just fluent and structurally sounds, and the content was equally to par. Overall on a collab stand point, I'm not quite sure if I'm all over this.. simply because Pak came with something I was really feeling, where as Nash kind of fell short of the mark. Also, I felt like the styles were just too different to make for a sound collab; I never really got that vibe of cohesiveness.
    po'ethics /
    abstanticollective.

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    Preciate that Atticus.

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    thanks ..guess i'll work even harder ..lol



    ask baron though, i had this up like 20 minutes after he sent me his verse, and it only took like 12-15 minutes to write my part :\ ..so i didn't take A LOT of time, but i still thought it was good.

    thanks atti ..

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    Quote Originally Posted by It's Nash!
    thanks ..guess i'll work even harder ..lol



    ask baron though, i had this up like 20 minutes after he sent me his verse, and it only took like 12-15 minutes to write my part :\ ..so i didn't take A LOT of time, but i still thought it was good.

    thanks atti ..
    Yup.

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    well in a way i sense you both did good.....nash came more with such metaphors and multies and paka came with detailed emotion and stroied rhymescehem i can tel who is who through both structures by the way... i liked the drop but the topic was really icky man i didnt like it but your verses stood out for out nah mean not the best by you too nah mean but you too definately got this good in ways better than some other OM writers so word to you both dropping well together .

    cheers to you both
    pls hit this up

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=321025
    ARTIFICIAL | PO'ETHICS | INTELLIGENCE

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    Re: "Meaningless Defined" - Feat. Baron P. Mortuus

    thanks, will feedback later.

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