Baron Says (Put ya Dukes up)

[Moniker]

Artist: Mind Monch
Track: Baron Says (Put ya Dukes up!)
Album: Feudalism Is Dead




Get back to work!
Baron says get back to work!
Got a cauldron in the kitchen (bubblin fiends)
England's bringin plows to expound their turf.
Witches, get ya burnin stakes claimed (they did it!)
Yea, I accused you; gasoline crosses aimed.
Light em up, pitch forks glisten with a twitch if
we ditch the finch which resists it's existence.

Best bet your pheasants,
these peasants still kill the game-bird,
arrows stayed quilled until we flank more.
Pleasant words festooned by prisoner's plumes
always waving their chains like wizards,
so let my sword anoint the peoples choice;
giving awards to whoever has a wand to point
or a joint staff, heavy head of metal... hoist.
I advise we draw bridges after our entourage
drowned in the moat (you can't beat the barrage).
Sand castles won't float, We'll choke if we don't
start adding another dank oasis to the mirage.

Put ya Dukes up!
Council says put ya Dukes up!
Take a chair, I don't care where you sit (wrong one)
Jester's split his pants and their audacious guts.
Queens, the princess skipped her confession.
Yea, I saw the wench undressing (clenched fists)
Despair is bed ridden causing inbred marriages,
mis-carriage driven, incest insisting we trade wages given.

I got burlesque quartets that more or less depend
on sonnets presented for a whore's stipend.
They aren't just arduous women that gripe when
the hard part of this precedes loose bosoms.
It's the slight grin on the lofty arsce of the kingdom's
who are sparse with supplies the earlier farce implied.
With no lasses to harass, crass voters missed the boat
thats casting cares to the wind as religious promoters
left the atlas; sassed back to exodus and can't charter
farther then the barter system.. the new-world's smarter.
Done away the dismay of saying "please the lords orders"
So if our building walls fall? "then you need more mortar!"

String em up again, play every instrument and violin,
and don't forget to ask the martyrs how they're hangin.

Earl, put ya Dukes (of) up!
Ellington, put ya Dukes up!
University, put ya Dukes up!

[Moniker]

[D. Josey]

I think I got this piece. It was more of a lyrical drawl, than anything else, because it was you reciting things in a sort of rap-fashion. As for the name, I guess you were impersonating Pharohe Monch in this, or something? As for the wordplay, it was superb, I liked how you put this together. A creative concept man. I guess this was supposed to be a song imitation, but it was the creativity that took it. It had a nicve flow, and I liked how you put this thing all together, I guess it flew over a lot of kids` heads, and that's the reason why there's no feed. Overall, good job on this. Interesting, very.

[Moniker]

Got em' Brix
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...09#post5335909
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=318602


And thanks Exact, appreciate the look man. I don't seem to be getting to many reads these days. I would have figured a rendition of Pharoahe Monch's classic "Simon Says" would have peaked more interest.

[S.K.O.R.C.H]

K. Mindless, must admit I liked how u came on this track. It was a talented find amongst all these other non skilled cats for a change. From the beginning ur play on words was ill and u never let up.
"(Best bet your pheasants,
these peasants still kill the game-bird,
arrows stayed quilled until we flank more.)"-Nice start
"(so let my sword anoint the peoples choice;
giving awards to whoever has a wand to point
or a joint staff, heavy head of metal... hoist.
I advise we draw bridges after our entourage
drowned in the moat (you can't beat the barrage).
Sand castles won't float, We'll choke if we don't
start adding another dank oasis to the mirage.)"-Like i said, never let up. nice addition.
"( With no lasses to harass, crass voters missed the boat
thats casting cares to the wind as religious promoters
left the atlas; sassed back to exodus and can't charter
farther then the barter system.. the new-world's smarter)"-Lastly, I was feeling the finish. Overall, nice piece and it's F'd up u aint getting more attention. -1- 6/10

[Spoken]

this was nice man dope content in lyrical status and the metaphors used and storyline was on point as was well pointed out in strong points man!. the vocaba and how you blended the flow and also your creative thought was just superb man the diffrent stanzas of like baron and then the rap imitation and then MONCH... this was just filled with creativity man and dope multies aswell... the wordings in this was idk just set nicely and fitted right on in man seriously a dope put together man... nice job.

RTF on any link in my sig...pls.
thanx

[Cody Nash]

well, very different. which i think is what you were going for really. it's not really THAT different though how it compares to a normal "hip-hop" artist's stanza. personally, people tell me in my pieces that i lack wording in places and abbreviate things more than say the full sentence. but in this piece, it seems to be exactly what you're doing. which is something i LOVE to do. it seems more fitting as it comes off the top of your head rather than making the entire piece one big edited slump. your vocabulary usage was, as usual, great. couple points i fell off, but probably only because i pronounced a word wrong or something. to be honest, the storyline was so confusing to me. it seemed like it was on some DEEP metaphorical shit. but what i KIND OF GOT was you expressing the many different scenarios of fighting and war. wizards with swords and pinpoints, to fixing walls, and hanging martyrs. from what i GOT, it was a great story, but i can't promise you that i got all of it :\ ..forgive me for still being in school homie. lol.


but anyways, good read, thank you.

[Moniker]

Thanks guys. Cry, I'm hesitant to explain it to make it clearer for you, but I don't want to give away anything for the other readers, you know?

[Cody Nash]

pm me, unless i really did get most of it right :\

[Moniker]

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