got a foot in tha door now....no stoppin me

[O.Z.]

Got a foot in the door...Tim on the foot//
I don't gotta threatin ya'll i'll just give you a look//
Skin covers my chest, vest covers my skin//
And no towel can clean up the mess that your in//
Got my hand on ya throat, glove on my hand//
And a butter knife wit "toast" to get me out of a "jam"//
I'm so "street" i can't hop on the curb//
Peel ya skin back and crip walk on ya nerves//
I got your yes men ample-to-nod//
I'm a business man...get at me...i'll hand you my card//
And thats the same hand that'll smack you twice//
And 1 more for good measure, you ain't actin right//
I got crews on their key boards typin away//
But thats gettin old, you could type till ya grey//
Sonny i catch bodys, I'm droppin coffins//
At the funeral parlor bargin shoppin//
...........2 for 1? yessir....i'm talkin-options......

[Ascend]

Hmm,...I suppose this was pretty good, the best was line was...the one about Toast and jam. It should have been longer and had more substance but it was still straight, keep up.

[Brandon Cee]

You'll need links or it's closed!

Well it was cool since it was a "freestyle," but honestly, you seem to have an almost childish vocabulary and word usage. You had a cool flow, but that's about it....keep working at it...you got the potential for texting I think.

[nolonger]

^boom