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    Setting Sail Onward to Maturity.

    My Personal Biography By: Life.



    Connections with my dad were bonded by radio waves and football games
    And listening to stories from his Army history that’d put GI Joe to shame
    High-school games on a chilly Friday night, watch the Tennessee Vols the next day
    Stay up late to discuss the game; then up early the next morning to watch NFL games!
    I remember waking up in the killjoy known to most people as a dreary Monday morning
    To hear my dad on the radio hosting his radio show along with music & weather warnings
    Nothing was awkward, this seemed like the perfect life to my family and me
    But little did I know that a branch was about to be damaged on my family tree.

    I was just the age of 12 when the muggy summer of 04’ rolled around
    Baseball pennants, teenage couples, and vacations were the talk of the town
    I was absorbed with baseball, dreams of playing in the major league in my head
    Failing to realize the earlier times that my father was retreating to bed
    Watching July roll around, having to pull over on the road due to his health
    And being emotionally drained from the lack of economic wealth

    I’ll remember that day...

    I was casually sitting on the couch, watching a re-run of a Braves game
    When he walked through the door, body sweaty, clammy, and lame
    He told me that he was headed to the hospital, no need to be worried
    That his recovery would be successful and most definitely hurried
    When the next Sunday came by, he was sent to a hospital far from me
    And I found the situation as awkward as the devil would find funny


    Soon word spread around town, it was announced that a fundraiser would go down
    And the fact that people in this world really do have hearts was soon found
    Selling food, listening to music, wishing that this even would never end
    But when I departed home it seemed as a whole new chapter would begin
    Seeing my dad’s car in the driveway when I pulled in, I was looking for a answer
    Which bluntly came in the form of him announcing that he had liver cancer

    My story seemed to go..
    Another day, another hospital; unsure of the future, living one stressful breath at a time
    Trying to cling to all the warm hearts and helpful hands that my then-feeble mind could find
    Time flew by in a jet made of the tattered remnants of hope going a mile a second
    Hell, having him there for one final Christmas was my most treasured present
    His final days were spent in the abyss of a hospital room just staying with my mother
    And his final second was spent about 20 minutes before the call from my brother

    The first thing that overcame me was the most terrible emotional balm
    As I entered the lobby to wrap my arms around and comfort my mom
    For I knew I’d have to mature quickly, although it was too soon for me to grow to a man
    And on January 14th, 2005...I set sail, clinging to my memories, just trying to find stable land

    RIP GWP.
    1948-2005






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    rise.
    this is some true shit about my dad.
    i know it isn't great, just some real shit I wrote.
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    good job..

    i read it, and you already know what I would've said so yeah..

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    i thought it was pretty coo', the fact it had the element that it was true makes the emotion that little but better, painted some good imagery, altho lyrically this was lackin, i thought you did a good job . . . .

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