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    "King Of The Delta Blues".

    "The King Of The Delta Blues".
    Stranger things have happened.



    If I stopped for Robert Johnson, you'd probably think I'm on some
    But you don't have go to hell for the Devil to collect his ransom.
    N'though he be handsome - & bold.. he still sold his soul..
    ..for the pluck of any string turning notes into gold.

    I bet your thinking, "I've never heard of this guy!", so Ima try
    To dramatise, a rap squashing mishaps, supporting false allibis.
    Cuz I can straight up clarify, that on the trail of Mississippi
    I tried to shake it off, but I couldn't have lost - the evil with me.
    This artists easel was swifty, painting colours with black
    & while the rapture attacked he was still able to capture facts
    Leaving this master intact, with listeners 30 years on - devine
    melody carried with time, while Satan waited at route 61 & 49.
    A wives tale sublime, but true, if essence was new & packaged
    A modern day musician with a story, would duely be savaged.
    & his music had it, all of the bliss. Something you couldn't miss
    in Led Zeppelin & the Rolling Stones, were Robert Johnsons kids.
    An undying wish was his, that his legacy be protected by depths
    of fire that would burn a whole in hearts & depart the best.
    & now he sleeps at rest, or on the lash of a higher powers whip
    he was proud to sell his soul, when people called him cowardest..
    he devoured it. & made sure his cure was the power of music
    Enduring reclusive, & the barred luck bestowed on the ellusive,
    he was finally collected but refused.. fighting the posion
    Poisoned by a man full of jelousy, but he opted to join'em.
    In this pick up mission of annoyance, as they waited 20 years
    For a pact they made that clearly reduced RJ's fear.
    & replace it with sheer talent, to hear this man would warm
    Cold hearts torn with a piercing stab in the side with a thorn.
    Cuz these are the people who'll carry it on, and will be..
    ..begrudged with the same debt, that finally brought RJ ceased.
    So when you crease your clothes, just know hearing handsome Johnson
    You'll most likely pick up up the same ransom warrant.



    If I stopped for Robert Johnson, you'd probably think I'm on some
    But you don't have go to hell for the Devil to collect his ransom.
    N'though he be handsome - & bold.. he still sold his soul..
    ..for the pluck of any string turning notes into gold.

    Who knows if the Devil actually came clappin' and gave him talent,
    ..but it just seems to me, that stranger things have happened.
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    damn yo this ws tight i really liked the ending very unique topic great job D.H.

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    good topic

    needs work

    your flow is off

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    Lol, terrible..
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    no links closed.....ha ha

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    I reply on enough, plus clean this shiz up. So I get free tokens anyways w00t!
    Oh, and thanks for getting in the swing again. I couldn't find a thread for me to close :-)
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    Yo I like dat shit keep it up

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    lmfao wow @ no feed at all (worth reading). Well I liked this peice, as you know since I gave it the verse of the week in SS. You told a great stroy here, the first two lines really set it up for an interesting and enjoyable read. Your flow was top notch as usual, and the emotion was felt. I really got into this peice, and you made it so that I didn't want to stop reading, which of course is a very important, and hard factor to master in a verse. So yea nice peice dude I was really feeling it, I'll nominate this for HOF. Nice shit, props.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311710
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    first let me say fuc brix and all his dopeness... dope loser

    but nah this was a nice ass peice man, your opener made me want to read more
    cuz man i hate to try and read shit in it start's off wack.. a strong opener will catch
    attention and let the reader assume it's more to come.. well good for you there was more to come, can't really say anything bad about this here... the vocab was on point n so forth.. the pis really added to the value, but wasn't needed for visual.. nice story man


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    very nice piece, good unique story line, the whole thing had a different feel to it, it flowed nicely, and you stayed on point throughout, i enjoyed every second off it, i like the way this piece captivated me n the emotions which showed through, the wording off this piece was top notch, i dont think you could have done much better on this, definate HOF nomination, keep it up.. pz

    yo can u hit mines up its called *pearly gates of judgement day*

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    This piece was tight...Crazy multi usage....it flowed well through out the read...The Topic was different yet interesting....I never even knew who this guy was until right now so this piece was educational as well...The imagery was mediocore yet I still seem to imagine his story as I read through it.. Overall this was the best drop I've seen in O-M in a while as far as completeness...Good shit Brix


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    Ah, well Brix, I have a feeling i'll never see, this piece was unoriginal, becaue you always tell a story about history, historical, nonfiction topicals, its a style to your own, and you use it wekll. your meter was even, and your rhyme scheme stayed consistant throughout. the emotion was great, notes to gold line just sold this piece to me, not much I can criticise here man, so yeah, this has already been nominated, so theres no need for me do to it. excellent piece. but

    ransome/on some is forced, hoe =P

    hit up my fish out water piece.

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    very nicely written. loved how you portrayed the entire subject, it wasn't some blabbing on about some artist, it was a great story, revealing the great life of a man. I LOVED the way you compared the devil to soul ..that was a nice comparison there. very tiight wordplay. a great topic for you, original as always ..and you took this and made it your own with those mad multies and metaphors. GREAT read.

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