The swagger falls...... fuck a chritic

[The Vortex]

Yo dog ease-up, I really think you should take a breather
N in SS ill give u an inch, since I’m NOT a topical head either
Ill stroke ya moms beaver just to get the juices flowing
Ho ya punkass best believe you gone be str8 john Doeing
Knowing I’m best as I loop a noose on this bitches neck
The slag only bags respect posing at fag wet T-shirt contests
So confess I’m harsh like time in Belmarsh & Rykers Isle
ill detach your lips from your moustach N wipe away your smile
Pimping this pipsqueak till next week the geek’ll be tipsy
It’s a unsolved mystery way I turn this shit Chrit to a Christie
Light & crispy I toast boasters N busters w/ toxic flames
N I know where you live punk, u’re halfway up Halfwit Lane
W/ half a brain to maintain you - don’t need much air
Your usual rap is bullshit, & the thread is bald on your spare
<prolly like the hair on your nutsac when I look back on it kid
yeah i make you look more stupid, although you already did

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[P. Mortuus]

lol.....concentrate on your SS that's more imortant for now na mean

[The Vortex]

^ na i dont need to bro i got a verse already for that since yesterday

ha


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311231
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310252

[SlimDeaZ]

its was str8 diss... i like the flow, and the ryhme skeme fited okay in it. The personals were also str8, but cud've been better. also the punches. the structure was clear very easy to read. but i think ya personal should've hit hard..str8 piece tho

[NiNjah Red]

yea thanx 4 checkin it out n feelin da flow bro. . i'm just warming back up on this tip u kno.ha ha

[Witty]

This was decent, I didn't think you did text lol. Anyway, you had some good punches in here, one of them even made me laugh, which doesn't happen very often. You had some dope personals and this diss flowed quite well too. Your rhyme scheme was much better in this one lol, nice read dude. Props. But just as a warning, if Chrit decides to come back and diss you, I don't think you stand a chance. Keep at it dude.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...81#post5187281
^return the favour please

[Jon]

Pretty good, uh.. I couldnt decide if this was a diss or just a text rant about scattered emotions.. so.. *blank*.

Anyways, whatever it was, you had nice flow and multies in most parts, in other parts you kind of fell off, but overall it was pretty good. I liked a few lines like:

Light & crispy I toast boasters N busters w/ toxic flames
N I know where you live punk, u’re halfway up Halfwit Lane
W/ half a brain to maintain you - don’t need much air
Your usual rap is bullshit, & the thread is bald on your spare

the last to lines were.. uh.. not really funny or effective.

but yeah, keep writing, and leave feed on The Truth collabo if you can.

[B.I.Detained.]

CLOSED, AND SO IS CHRITS. BATTLE.. BUT NOT IN HERE.
THERE'S NO EFFORT PUT IN ON BOTH SIDES.

Lol, just ignore the haters V.