Ink Blot Blues: SC Topical Collab (pt.1)

[Bounce]

Ink Blot Blues: Face the Music


haunting vocals consume me, taunting my nature
flaunting choke holds to bruise me, wanting a favor
she whispers sweet rhythms composed in deep flavor
the savior of souls, she blew me a melodic kiss
an erotic gift of mellow tones blown in a chaotic midst
where warring heads & bloodied fists collide in stride..
..in a sort of jukebox pride, & the prize fighter is tried
& convicted of being punch drunk in public places
so I space out on melodies whaled in open spaces
a street corner musician jailed forever behind bars
I bathe in the sinful waters of harmony & deep scars
lost in a saxophone oasis, where the gift of music..
.................................................. ..................tenderly awakes us!





Ink Blot Blues: Having Twins


When I heard it, my mind was converted
from the lifestyle I live to a virgin
need to change my ways from day to day
be nice to my wife, try to cage my rage
cuz i smoke a half a day to mask the pain
and deal with the shit that falls like acid rain
plus if thats the case, I gotta provide now
somebody tell my fun personality to die now
when u see your kin thru sound, that's kinda it
time to quit when the doc says
"Congratulations, You're havin twins"




Ink Blot Blues: Violent Cries


violence is inside my eyelids
violent cries entice my mindlessness
i cant find the bliss to try to escape though
i need a scapegoat to take hold a time like this
i've beaten 'n killed seekin for thrills of better means
destroyin boys n girls in a world of methamphetamines
s'got me runnin from my past hopin to escape my future
cutting off the water to the seeded faith of users
snakes and losers... a sadistic life that spells fatal
cause there isnt any room in heaven for a hells angel

Ink Blot Blues: The Progression of Me

An image so silent, telling a story so vibrant
How pain and strife led to flashes of violence
Starts with an image of weakness...
...the reason
The transition to power is seamless
Arms at a side, barron of pride
Swell after dedication at nights
He lives for the fights, leaving them sore
Bruises and scars are like medals he wore
With his hands raised... he drew endless praise...
Wait...
On this page...
Could it be??? What I have perceived
Is really.. the progression of me?

[Bounce]

Just wanted to post before I'm ghost

SC, you guys sort out the feed and what not.

Line up: Bounce, vylint, Jay and chrit...

(no need for names in the post, it's a collab)

[Chrit.]

as a crew... I guarantee we have replied on enough.

[Engivale]

Poetic, well worded, meaningful... everything I look for in an OM. The flow was really good in some places and a little less so in others, The opening was very well done, four solid lines and the rhyme and syllable counts were perfect, I'm sure there was good time spent to make sure those first few lines were fire... Some of the continuity of that rhyme scheme that was developed was a little lost at some points, but always came back. One of my fav parts:

An image so silent, telling a story so vibrant
How pain and strife led to flashes of violence

That was a cool way, it ended well too. Good job, I'm sure you won't be gone completely... someone like you, the writing bug is sure to bite you from time to time.

[Chrit.]

assholes

[Richard Parker]

Nice piece.. very interesting topic, something I wish I would have thought of. It was well written, however, I don't like the writing style... I think the poetic touches you added somewhat detracted from the personal feel the topic could've had. Too abstract for my taste. (going back to the discussions we've had on aim: the evolve/camarac/ghod writing style vs. yours - their normal approach is what I refer to when I say "more direct" vs. "abstract") I'm having trouble telling you what I didn't like, but hopefully what I just wrote is understandable. good job

[eyeQ]

One of the few people on this site who actually grasps the concept of multis. My only beef with this piece are the transitions. For instance, if I were writing this, I would rework this

haunting vocals consume me, taunting my nature
flaunting choke holds to bruise me, wanting a favor
she whispers sweet rhythms composed in deep flavor
the savior of souls, she blew me a melodic kiss
an erotic gift of mellow tones blown in a chaotic midst

into this...

haunting vocals consume me, taunting my nature
flaunting choke holds to bruise me, wanting a favor
she whispers sweet rhythms composed in deep flavor
A souls unique savior...Blown in a sweet-razor-melodic kiss
an erotic gift of mellow tones blown in a chaotic midst


More or less...just throwing words in there but thats how the rhyme sceme should go. Just my imput. Sick piece otherwise.

[Chrit.]

lmao @ most people think this was only bounce

[Richard Parker]

I knew it wasn't just bounce, hence "collab" in the title. i just dont know why nobody else was given credit. Lol. its prolly an experiment to see if people ride penis just because of who posted this or something. or prolly im way off the mark.

[Chrit.]

I knew it wasn't just bounce, hence "collab" in the title. i just dont know why nobody else was given credit. Lol. its prolly an experiment to see if people ride penis just because of who posted this or something. or prolly im way off the mark.

not an experiment at all...

just the different sections were... bounce, vylint, jay, and me...

I'm sure you can see who did what

[Possible]

Bounce, get on the fucking mic. Seriously man, your shit is deeper than trenches in the atlantic. The imagry of your pieces leaves chills in my spine. Its no wonder that your not a song writer for like half the industry. I mean you could easily qualify for any genre. You are like one of the only people that make me feel in the topic. Not only that, you actually write so that people who do not write topical writings can understand it. Most people write some shit and use words that even they do not understand. Keep it B. Dope drop.

[Chrit.]

Cheers

[Daz]

Dope. I like this whole thing. Everyones verse was up to par to make this a dope collab. Like said before me..some parts the flow fell but overall there's nothing to complain about. Good work fellaz

[Possible]

Oh shit, my bad Chrit. I thought this was only Bounce. Makes it even better that you all worked together this well. My bad for the misunderstanding.

[da king01]

This was a fucking dope collab, wtf @ you lying to me about your talent Chrit lol. Anyway I really liked this, it was a great read, and I really enjoyed it. I'm not even sure who wrote what lol, all I know is that this was great peice, and I expect to see some more of this dopeness in SS Chrit, it's just a damn shame we won't be seeing Bounce in SS for a while. Nice peice, Best of the month in my opinion, sorry for the short feed, I'm a bit busy, I'll edit with more later. Props to all who participated in this collab