10 lines,
30 min deadline,
no feeding biting etc.
daddy kwick
EyeCue
10 lines,
30 min deadline,
no feeding biting etc.
word. this is my c.heck. Whats really good Newb.............................................. .................................................. .......
check. check,
lol i jus a newb here,
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EZ
Ya Wack Spits Don't Concern Me while my tongue spits Acid Till It's Burning.
To be honest, your no REAL competition - more like Practice For a Tourney.
Ain't no need to catch feelings cuzzin. You need to just face it, You Ain't Hot!
It don't take a lot to impress me. Maybe a few hot lines which obviously You Ain't Got!
I'm getting a lil Mean In This Spit. Getting straight personal - Clean When I Hit.
& ya rhymes like 'PG13 movies' b'cuz 'punches' are never Scene In Ya Scripts'
I think he just angry b'cuz IQs Lines Are Great while his Lines A Waste.
& his spits arent ONLY played. He's tryna 'make shirts that were out Since '98'.,
Punches branding ya mind b because i'm handing defined heat!
Daddy Kwick in the shadow of greatness. When standing behind me!
First off son, KWICk has a C. illiterate fuck, next time try and proof-read...
my spits are words of god. cause like moses...I part the red sea...
its what happens when my punches take out ya front and back teeth...
like it began, its gonna be over when i close this sea drownin this young emcee...
Imma ~POP~this ~EYE~ like my spts just ate some canned spinach...
cause ya QUE's been drawn, ya lost..now im hittin' ya face wit it...
My Verbal Essence gonan leave this bitch moanin and beggin for more...
Im bouts to make ya mouth bleed...like i just tied ya loose tooth to the door...
my wild instincts just picked up this lesser stags musky sent...
cause after this battle............
...................................ya shit still gonna say zero percent.....
VOTE in this bitch....................................!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin for votes
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where the votes at people????? I know you guys want vote son ya battles... Do the same for other folks............................................. .................................................. ...
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Ya Wack Spits Don't Concern Me while my tongue spits Acid Till It's Burning.
To be honest, your no REAL competition - more like Practice For a Tourney.
statment
Ain't no need to catch feelings cuzzin. You need to just face it, You Ain't Hot!
It don't take a lot to impress me. Maybe a few hot lines which obviously You Ain't Got!
ok
I'm getting a lil Mean In This Spit. Getting straight personal - Clean When I Hit.
& ya rhymes like 'PG13 movies' b'cuz 'punches' are never Scene In Ya Scripts'
meh
I think he just angry b'cuz IQs Lines Are Great while his Lines A Waste.
& his spits arent ONLY played. He's tryna 'make shirts that were out Since '98'.,
wtf? na
Punches branding ya mind b because i'm handing defined heat!
Daddy Kwick in the shadow of greatness. When standing behind me!
self glory no
vs
First off son, KWICk has a C. illiterate fuck, next time try and proof-read...
my spits are words of god. cause like moses...I part the red sea...
self glory no
its what happens when my punches take out ya front and back teeth...
like it began, its gonna be over when i close this sea drownin this young emcee...
no
Imma ~POP~this ~EYE~ like my spts just ate some canned spinach...
cause ya QUE's been drawn, ya lost..now im hittin' ya face wit it...
meh
My Verbal Essence gonan leave this bitch moanin and beggin for more...
Im bouts to make ya mouth bleed...like i just tied ya loose tooth to the door...
no
my wild instincts just picked up this lesser stags musky sent...
cause after this battle............
...................................ya shit still gonna say zero percent.....
no
Thi battle was one sided imo. Eyecue you had some decent line's some self glory but overall your verse was ok for a newb. Daddy kiwck your verse was weak man, try throwing punche's and stop with the pintless stetments or self glory. Elevate.
v/Eyecue
coo.
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i wouldn't call this battle one-sided
eyecue
Ya Wack Spits Don't Concern Me while my tongue spits Acid Till It's Burning.
To be honest, your no REAL competition - more like Practice For a Tourney.
[weak statement]
Ain't no need to catch feelings cuzzin. You need to just face it, You Ain't Hot!
It don't take a lot to impress me. Maybe a few hot lines which obviously You Ain't Got!
[catch feelings... hot and got...... bleh]
I'm getting a lil Mean In This Spit. Getting straight personal - Clean When I Hit.
& ya rhymes like 'PG13 movies' b'cuz 'punches' are never Scene In Ya Scripts'
[wordplay and multi but first half adds nothing to its impact]
I think he just angry b'cuz IQs Lines Are Great while his Lines A Waste.
& his spits arent ONLY played. He's tryna 'make shirts that were out Since '98'.,
[self glory -> wackness]
Punches branding ya mind b because i'm handing defined heat!
Daddy Kwick in the shadow of greatness. When standing behind me!
[played concept poorly implented]
daddy kwick
First off son, KWICk has a C. illiterate fuck, next time try and proof-read...
my spits are words of god. cause like moses...I part the red sea...
[well at least you start off on the attack... and while you do self-glorify a little it sets you up in part for your next bar]
its what happens when my punches take out ya front and back teeth...
like it began, its gonna be over when i close this sea drownin this young emcee...
[red sea= bleeding mouth? and teeth and emcee doesnt really rhyme... interesting concept but u could have worded it a lot better]
Imma ~POP~this ~EYE~ like my spts just ate some canned spinach...
cause ya QUE's been drawn, ya lost..now im hittin' ya face wit it...
[alright i dont think u need this between pop and eye, i almost missed ur reference... and whatever u were trying to say with que i didnt get at all]
My Verbal Essence gonan leave this bitch moanin and beggin for more...
Im bouts to make ya mouth bleed...like i just tied ya loose tooth to the door...
[verbal essence...sounds like a lotion or shampoo man...and enough with the mouthbleed- its played anyway-this bar was a disaster]
my wild instincts just picked up this lesser stags musky sent...
cause after this battle............
...................................ya shit still gonna say zero percent.....
[gay gay finish- its scent- and did i mention how gay it was]
conclusion:
eyecue was a little more consistent even though he was less original
kwick- ur last 2 bars were gay- and closing consistently is one of the most important aspects of any battle-still some of ur lines showed good potential
IJL
thanks 2-0 upin,
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