10 lines
Due by midnight
you know the rules...
10 lines
Due by midnight
you know the rules...
Check...imma have mine in soon.............................................. .................................................. ........................
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you couldnt start this battle right if this thread came with a easy OPEN twist top
when i say to stop dick riding i mean it, so instead try not to HOP~ON~POP
Look, wit a boxin' glove on ya dick ya couldn't COME WIT HITS...
So stop this shit before I PASS~A~FIRE and STOP YA FITS...
I'll play golf with ya NUTS, now that's what I call a FORE-FATHER...
I'm more hotter, the only time Danger spits hot is in the shower...
You a female net gangsta and ya keep poppin' off at the clit...
And you sound like you ate shoes, cause you keep RUNNIN' YA LIPS...
i cut ya hopes with my SLINGBLADE leavin u retarded and talking to urself all day
i would give you a three vote lead and i bet ur ass still couldnt CAST~A~WAY
Daddy take your time – don’t hit keys too quick
Take the time you’d use… applying your lipstick
Slow down, plan your steps, you’ll be granted no quarter.
Demonstrate the care your wife did in the court order.
Patience is a virtue… or so she said
Not that she thought much of your others- kwick in and out of the bed.
Aptly named with self-imposed constraints on your fame
Sun sets in the west like tarnish does on your name
I hate to kick a dad when he’s drowned – sea call outs can be tragic
Sailing out for acceptance, finding lost causes pelagic.
good battle and good luck (uppin #1)
isnt it handy that upping also counts for posts? i think so #2
for the love of all that is holy please give some feedback #3
-#4
IJL
Vote - Danger
Reason:
More wit in his verse....Daddy came ok...but alot of those lines were a bunch of senseless wordplay...with no real punch...work on your wit if you want to get better....Danger had a pretty decent verse...still needs to brush up on use of fresher concepts....other than that....it was kinda one sided....Danger won for having a harder verse...
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IJL
V.Danger
looked like he knew what he was doing more and actually tryed to incorperate some wit in his verse, both of you go read the LLL and you will elevate alot faster!
Buddha Blessed
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