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    Supercalafragilisticexpealadocious

    No public revelation transceding upon the universe
    Not speaking the clear meaning that you rehearse
    Human's learn, I paint pictures with absinthe paint
    My tounge as the brush, hush, this is sparatic clay
    Molded into something that only I can penetrate
    Greeting mystery to life - as my appendage shakes
    Shredding crates full of scintillators - this is shadows
    Content lacking invoice like an eviscerator howel
    A remedy? The owls? The eyes see well at night
    Yet elocution is the solution to dispel this plight
    See the concept behind the whited sepulcher?
    Flesh burns like new words exicting the vultures
    Despite the occult verbs, I craft new languages
    Scripted in history, and bathe with the famousness
    Arrange a bit of mixed culture rhetoric impression
    Capital lexicon mixed with the spores of perfection
    Ignoring directions, I follow the flux of the eStyx
    ..................(Type like you speak, then go ahead and spitefully preach?)
    Unreal habitat? I guess i practice that as my regent
    Till I reach beaches of a tarnished phoenix, unlike babies
    you can't speak yet your writes even phase me!
    Misplacing..
    heat for the candle to one that melts logics borders
    Einstein's neoteric left his brainchild on my doorstep
    It scrambles my cortex, writing upwards forty fricatives
    Dictionwise...
    At least make it sure it corresponds and adjacent
    Before you start cloggin the pages, with despotic amounts
    ..........Of big words...
    ....................before you write..
    .............................please know what your talking about!

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    upping.

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    Soul, I enjoyed reading this. Went along at a quick pace, rhythm and rhyme were superb. You injected some nice creativity in formating, I.E. the parenthesis, and indentations at the end. Vocab and tone well executed. Content on point, seemingly a well put together rant. Nicely done man.

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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    yeah, thanks man.

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    yo faggotz

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    PLEASE change the title. it's a bit crap.ha

    illy ill format and vocab and mettas. and flow still for real......shit just jumps out the page and shit......
    wording is top shotter shit as well...........
    concept is fucking out the box......
    some of the vocab is little too much to take in at the moment. ciz i aint bout to look up a bunch a words i'm sorry to say. tho i did like a lot of the vocab anyway and understood what i needed to.................. visual descriptions was vivid.....
    yeah cool ending i reckon. ha



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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=307753
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    yup, thanks... ill get to the link.

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