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LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
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Last edited by Mr W.Rite; July 23rd, 2006 at 09:38 PM
Originally Posted by RB Magazine about Write
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
He'll diss my family but I'm meaner you'd best believe this prick's a dreamer
Coz they say life can be a bitch.. and this fucking fag ain't got either
He thinks A.I. are league leaders, but bitch which teams expressing power?
Philly only applied for YOUR crew coz he knows he'd never get in ours
I'd see my knife stuck in Write... but I fear I won't cut him right
So I'll just make a toast to his career, and spread his face with the butterknife
You've lost the sexyness, you're off putting...you come better when you drop nuthin
Your verses used to turn us on... now we're all clawing for the off button
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
Don't pin your hopes on your drop prick, you opened your mouth and I rocked it
Well, I told this bitch to keep mum.. and the poor fag was adopted
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
And we know this guy is well liked, he never sways or acts pushy
Infact the only thing below the belt about write... is a pussy
He ain't fussy about emotions, dunno what he's thinking this minute
So read on if you wanna see him express his feelings.. with a grimace
He's the biggest so show respect while I put him up on a podium
No one's holding a candle to Write..till I get the petroleum
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dam i didnt realized you posted earlier today
i need an extension til tomorrow
i just got home and my brothers friends are using the computer
plus i am tired as fuck
if you want u can remove your verse til post
its up to you..
but i cant no show, give me till tomorrow
it's not a no show... the rules say midday saturday.
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
thanks for you patience
now..
Respect my gangster bitch…
Against the grain, n’ time of essence…but im glad this bitch could make it
I’d say thanks for baring with me, but im scared that’d get you naked
Im flawless in text…rest lame, you’re no comp - this suckers weak
thought Spit had played clichés to death, looks like u got that fucker beat
Fuck, here lies the mourners, his seasons dead, I’ll drown this scorner
Least you’re a step closer to being champ, next seasons around the corner
You were a spark when u started now u trash…Com ya fames dead
You’re only mistaken for greatness, when I’m posting in the same thread
Been wondering why ya bitch is hot…well I cant pretend cousin
Remember im still the man that beat you and the one she’s been fucking
Been in your shoes, and given my props, n’ Com is dying to get some
You’ve got a big future ahead, and you’ll still be trying to win one
Wanna know how I rank ya skill, its worse than cancerous sessions
Nothing against Britain but…
I’ve never liked Yoo, Kay-hope that answers your question
After its over, we’ll know the truth…this well wisher get doubted
He proves theres more to just losing, theres crying and bitchin about it
You’re here, it took forever, but I’m more than this rook can weather
And ya past verses grossed more than Superman and Pirates put together
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
For you…being dope is cheap-just wait until the voters speak
The best thing about beating you, is we won’t see you post for weeks
yea i went 22 who cares
-W.Rite
He thinks A.I. are league leaders, but bitch which teams expressing power?
Philly only applied for YOUR crew coz he knows he'd never get in ours
I'd see my knife stuck in Write... but I fear I won't cut him right
So I'll just make a toast to his career, and spread his face with the butterknife
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
^that line is dope bro...
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
vs.
Against the grain, n’ time of essence…but im glad this bitch could make it
I’d say thanks for baring with me, but im scared that’d get you naked
Wanna know how I rank ya skill, its worse than cancerous sessions
Nothing against Britain but…
I’ve never liked Yoo, Kay-hope that answers your question
After its over, we’ll know the truth…this well wisher get doubted
He proves theres more to just losing, theres crying and bitchin about it
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
close battle. that one bar may hurt you write.
vote com. bareellly
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
He'll diss my family but I'm meaner you'd best believe this prick's a dreamer
Coz they say life can be a bitch.. and this fucking fag ain't got either
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
^^lmao
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
^^rofl
And we know this guy is well liked, he never sways or acts pushy
Infact the only thing below the belt about write... is a pussy
^^hahaha
He ain't fussy about emotions, dunno what he's thinking this minute
So read on if you wanna see him express his feelings.. with a grimace
He's the biggest so show respect while I put him up on a podium
No one's holding a candle to Write..till I get the petroleum
vs.
You were a spark when u started now u trash…Com ya fames dead
You’re only mistaken for greatness, when I’m posting in the same thread
Been wondering why ya bitch is hot…well I cant pretend cousin
Remember im still the man that beat you and the one she’s been fucking
Been in your shoes, and given my props, n’ Com is dying to get some
You’ve got a big future ahead, and you’ll still be trying to win one
After its over, we’ll know the truth…this well wisher get doubted
He proves theres more to just losing, theres crying and bitchin about it
^^lol
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
^^rofl
For you…being dope is cheap-just wait until the voters speak
The best thing about beating you, is we won’t see you post for weeks
(Against the grain, n’ time of essence…but im glad this bitch could make it
I’d say thanks for baring with me, but im scared that’d get you naked
^^nah man, this was played ages ago, I can get the link to where I used it as a newb)
damn reading the start of Write's verse I thought Com'd take it easy, WRite picked it up after halfway but Com still takes it , barely
v/Com
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
He thinks A.I. are league leaders, but bitch which teams expressing power?
Philly only applied for YOUR crew coz he knows he'd never get in ours
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
vs.
Fuck, here lies the mourners, his seasons dead, I’ll drown this scorner
Least you’re a step closer to being champ, next seasons around the corner
You were a spark when u started now u trash…Com ya fames dead
You’re only mistaken for greatness, when I’m posting in the same thread
You’re here, it took forever, but I’m more than this rook can weather
And ya past verses grossed more than Superman and Pirates put together
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
For you…being dope is cheap-just wait until the voters speak
The best thing about beating you, is we won’t see you post for weeks
After re-reading the lines this morning, i'm gonna have to go with write here. really dope battle though. props to both.
v/ write
Last edited by Automatic.; July 23rd, 2006 at 11:47 AM
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
He'll diss my family but I'm meaner you'd best believe this prick's a dreamer
Coz they say life can be a bitch.. and this fucking fag ain't got either
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
And we know this guy is well liked, he never sways or acts pushy
Infact the only thing below the belt about write... is a pussy
He ain't fussy about emotions, dunno what he's thinking this minute
So read on if you wanna see him express his feelings.. with a grimace
He's the biggest so show respect while I put him up on a podium
No one's holding a candle to Write..till I get the petroleum
damn hoe face... nice shit
vs.
Fuck, here lies the mourners, his seasons dead, I’ll drown this scorner
Least you’re a step closer to being champ, next seasons around the corner
You were a spark when u started now u trash…Com ya fames dead
You’re only mistaken for greatness, when I’m posting in the same thread
You’re here, it took forever, but I’m more than this rook can weather
And ya past verses grossed more than Superman and Pirates put together
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
For you…being dope is cheap-just wait until the voters speak
The best thing about beating you, is we won’t see you post for weeks
damn nice lines man..
even tho com IMO had more quotes this still was a close n decent battle..
overall i have com winning this by a lil
V/com
Com:
I'd see my knife stuck in Write... but I fear I won't cut him right
So I'll just make a toast to his career, and spread his face with the butterknife
lol
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
decent
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
lol
He ain't fussy about emotions, dunno what he's thinking this minute
So read on if you wanna see him express his feelings.. with a grimace
He's the biggest so show respect while I put him up on a podium
No one's holding a candle to Write..till I get the petroleum
lol
Write:
Against the grain, n’ time of essence…but im glad this bitch could make it
I’d say thanks for baring with me, but im scared that’d get you naked
heh
Fuck, here lies the mourners, his seasons dead, I’ll drown this scorner
Least you’re a step closer to being champ, next seasons around the corner
lol
Been in your shoes, and given my props, n’ Com is dying to get some
You’ve got a big future ahead, and you’ll still be trying to win one
ouch
Wanna know how I rank ya skill, its worse than cancerous sessions
Nothing against Britain but…
I’ve never liked Yoo, Kay-hope that answers your question
easily the best bar of the battle, that was dope
After its over, we’ll know the truth…this well wisher get doubted
He proves theres more to just losing, theres crying and bitchin about it
You’re here, it took forever, but I’m more than this rook can weather
And ya past verses grossed more than Superman and Pirates put together
all good
that UK punch tilted the scale. I think Com came good,
Write was just more direct. This was a very good battle.
v/ Write
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
Damn, seems like a blowout to me. I was kinda feelin 6 lines from Write not really feelin em tho, nothin quoteable to me but i was really feelin Com's shyt. Just seems like Write's hol' verse was proving Com's opener right to me, plus me already thinkin that.
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
He'll diss my family but I'm meaner you'd best believe this prick's a dreamer
Coz they say life can be a bitch.. and this fucking fag ain't got either
He thinks A.I. are league leaders, but bitch which teams expressing power?
Philly only applied for YOUR crew coz he knows he'd never get in ours
I'd see my knife stuck in Write... but I fear I won't cut him right
So I'll just make a toast to his career, and spread his face with the butterknife
You've lost the sexyness, you're off putting...you come better when you drop nuthin
Your verses used to turn us on... now we're all clawing for the off button
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
---all good shyt.
V/Com by a good margin.
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
He thinks A.I. are league leaders, but bitch which teams expressing power?
Philly only applied for YOUR crew coz he knows he'd never get in ours
I'd see my knife stuck in Write... but I fear I won't cut him right
So I'll just make a toast to his career, and spread his face with the butterknife
You've lost the sexyness, you're off putting...you come better when you drop nuthin
Your verses used to turn us on... now we're all clawing for the off button
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
rotfl
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
He ain't fussy about emotions, dunno what he's thinking this minute
So read on if you wanna see him express his feelings.. with a grimace
He's the biggest so show respect while I put him up on a podium
No one's holding a candle to Write..till I get the petroleum
vs
Against the grain, n’ time of essence…but im glad this bitch could make it
I’d say thanks for baring with me, but im scared that’d get you naked
Fuck, here lies the mourners, his seasons dead, I’ll drown this scorner
Least you’re a step closer to being champ, next seasons around the corner
Wanna know how I rank ya skill, its worse than cancerous sessions
Nothing against Britain but…
I’ve never liked Yoo, Kay-hope that answers your question
After its over, we’ll know the truth…this well wisher get doubted
He proves theres more to just losing, theres crying and bitchin about it
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
decent battle.. W.rite you dissed cliches then dropped half your verse in cliche.. kinda hurt your verse.. Com was simply more consistant, good battle though from both
v/Com
Com
Originally Posted by RB Magazine about Write
Dude knows how to word punches. I'm not gonna lie, his concepts don't impress me, but the way he words them make them dope. I honestly think his concepts are gonna be what hold him back, if anything.
Bitch, I can't believe you ain't gone yet, I'll leave you speechless with one breath
Coz if Write's lost for wording... there's nothing to hide his shitty concepts
>decent.. but i remember using this back in the day.. not saying you bit.. but it has been done
He'll diss my family but I'm meaner you'd best believe this prick's a dreamer
Coz they say life can be a bitch.. and this fucking fag ain't got either
>lol
He thinks A.I. are league leaders, but bitch which teams expressing power?
Philly only applied for YOUR crew coz he knows he'd never get in ours
>ok
I'd see my knife stuck in Write... but I fear I won't cut him right
So I'll just make a toast to his career, and spread his face with the butterknife
>decent.. familiar.. again not biting.. i have just seen this concept before
You've lost the sexyness, you're off putting...you come better when you drop nuthin
Your verses used to turn us on... now we're all clawing for the off button
>LOL.. funny
I'll kill and savage ya mission, this is the man that you're dissin'
I'm built for this shit while you still need planning permission
>LOL
You're known to be played in the past..watch write get slayed in this match
When they say writes off the hook, they just mean I weighed in my catch
>nice
Don't pin your hopes on your drop prick, you opened your mouth and I rocked it
Well, I told this bitch to keep mum.. and the poor fag was adopted
>ehhhh
I'm against the tide here tonight, I'm on my own and have to manage
Coz I'm in virgin territory... so Write's got the home advantage
>LOL
And we know this guy is well liked, he never sways or acts pushy
Infact the only thing below the belt about write... is a pussy
>ok.. decent
He ain't fussy about emotions, dunno what he's thinking this minute
So read on if you wanna see him express his feelings.. with a grimace
>ehhh
He's the biggest so show respect while I put him up on a podium
No one's holding a candle to Write..till I get the petroleum
>nice closer
Write
Against the grain, n’ time of essence…but im glad this bitch could make it
I’d say thanks for baring with me, but im scared that’d get you naked
>lol
Im flawless in text…rest lame, you’re no comp - this suckers weak
thought Spit had played clichés to death, looks like u got that fucker beat
>ok
Fuck, here lies the mourners, his seasons dead, I’ll drown this scorner
Least you’re a step closer to being champ, next seasons around the corner
>decent
You were a spark when u started now u trash…Com ya fames dead
You’re only mistaken for greatness, when I’m posting in the same thread
>nice
Been wondering why ya bitch is hot…well I cant pretend cousin
Remember im still the man that beat you and the one she’s been fucking
>hmmm.. not really feeling this
Been in your shoes, and given my props, n’ Com is dying to get some
You’ve got a big future ahead, and you’ll still be trying to win one
>ehhh
Wanna know how I rank ya skill, its worse than cancerous sessions
Nothing against Britain but…
I’ve never liked Yoo, Kay-hope that answers your question
>lol.. nice
After its over, we’ll know the truth…this well wisher get doubted
He proves theres more to just losing, theres crying and bitchin about it
>lololol
You’re here, it took forever, but I’m more than this rook can weather
And ya past verses grossed more than Superman and Pirates put together
>decent
I’ll fuckin end ya career, you think you’re dope - Com see me in motion
All this time he’s been pulling my leg…just to keep me from posting
>ok
For you…being dope is cheap-just wait until the voters speak
The best thing about beating you, is we won’t see you post for weeks
LOL
In my honest opinion... even though me and Com had our differences.. i feel he took this with more quotables. I felt he was a little more witty and wanted it a little more. Write's was good.. but i didnt see any crushing lines.
Vote Com
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
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