1. Feeble Minded Vs. 2. Automatic

[Mystery~Murdera]

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[Richard Parker]

I'm here

[Automatic.]

check, how many lines?

[Richard Parker]

18 ..?

[Automatic.]

fine with me goodluck

[Richard Parker]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
Feeble's back to end your career.. I'm not being fucked with today
and sorry to disperse the rumors, but you're not good enough to be Lay
got an extension vs. nasdeey, n dropped less lines, it was ya finest moment
Biting spit's usernames.. you resort to bitchmoves to undermine opponents
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews
Here's some personals: I'm bad, You're dope, plus I'm hairy & Jewish
at least I won in RV's tag tourney without spitacular to carry me through it

Don't feed.

[Automatic.]

i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
u've got no intelligence dude, but u'll live n' die for ya crew
so i'll make u go out on a limb, and make that Artificial too
but now ur tryin new forums, in HOF ur gonna need more then luck
the reason no Member Pictures is cuz ur verses are wack as fuck
u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker
as admin ur a bust, take u seriously? we know u suck
we're like ur concepts the way ur wordplays zero affect on us

[Erupt]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews

vs

i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
u've got no intelligence dude, but u'll live n' die for ya crew
so i'll make u go out on a limb, and make that Artificial too
u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker


feeble wtf? did something come up coz I'm shocked, first you drop way under the limit you set then it is all very sub-feeble quality..

auto you came nice till the members pictures.. might just be my accent but it seemed forced as fuck... jay walker line must be the most current event punch I've ever seen lmao it just happened today... and the closer wasnt too good,, overall easily enough to take this in a big shocker


vote automatic

[$pitacular]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
kind of a weak wordplay on 'custom' / 'accustomed'.. meh
Feeble's back to end your career.. I'm not being fucked with today
and sorry to disperse the rumors, but you're not good enough to be Lay
harsh. and dope personal.
got an extension vs. nasdeey, n dropped less lines, it was ya finest moment
Biting spit's usernames.. you resort to bitchmoves to undermine opponents
the undermine thing's played..
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews
not very hard or witty
Here's some personals: I'm bad, You're dope, plus I'm hairy & Jewish
at least I won in RV's tag tourney without spitacular to carry me through it
another harsh personal.. decent

vs

i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
dope.
u've got no intelligence dude, but u'll live n' die for ya crew
so i'll make u go out on a limb, and make that Artificial too
again, dope.
but now ur tryin new forums, in HOF ur gonna need more then luck
the reason no Member Pictures is cuz ur verses are wack as fuck
nice wordplay
u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker
lmao!
as admin ur a bust, take u seriously? we know u suck
we're like ur concepts the way ur wordplays zero affect on us
nah


wow.. just.... wow.

v/ Auto.

[Cody Nash]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews
Here's some personals: I'm bad, You're dope, plus I'm hairy & Jewish
at least I won in RV's tag tourney without spitacular to carry me through it
owie :\ ..

Feebs - pretty straight forward personals the entire verse. some of them were just meh to me ..i liked the spitacular one at the end the best.

vs.

i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
^lol that was kinda dope.
u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker

Auto - some iffy lines ..nothing too harsh really. the final 4 line was your best one imo. i liked this jay walker line as well. the artificial line just wasnt appealing to me and the others were meh ..

both did good, but feeble was a lot more consistant i think. cool verses. decent read. would've liked it to be longer, but ya get what ya get i guess.

v. Feeble Minded

EDIT: also for some reason ..i thought i'd seen the artificial line before. :\

[Mystery~Murdera]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
this was okay, the LLL thing is sorta FL ish
Feeble's back to end your career.. I'm not being fucked with today
and sorry to disperse the rumors, but you're not good enough to be Lay
decent
got an extension vs. nasdeey, n dropped less lines, it was ya finest moment
Biting spit's usernames.. you resort to bitchmoves to undermine opponents
okay
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews
okay
Here's some personals: I'm bad, You're dope, plus I'm hairy & Jewish
at least I won in RV's tag tourney without spitacular to carry me through it
lol

Feeble: Hurt me here man. I thought this verse was "okay." I expected
you to come your best so you could get your rematch with $pit next round.


Auto
i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
i thought this was okay
u've got no intelligence dude, but u'll live n' die for ya crew
so i'll make u go out on a limb, and make that Artificial too
these are played... almost 4 years worth
but now ur tryin new forums, in HOF ur gonna need more then luck
the reason no Member Pictures is cuz ur verses are wack as fuck
okay....
u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker
okay
as admin ur a bust, take u seriously? we know u suck
we're like ur concepts the way ur wordplays zero affect on us
okay

I dunno man... i thought this was just okay, too.
Neither of you impressed me at all. I've only read two
verses this round I thought were good so far. I think you
guys both dropped below standard.

still i gotta go

v. Feeble

[Tae]

this shyt was good to me ma nig but eh...i was feeling feebs except prolly two lines and i wasnt really getin auto but i felt prolly two of his also but nah i gotta go with what i was feeling even tho i was surprised at the first two votes that came through and went over my decision again but in the end i still came to the same conclusion. V/ Feeble Minded.

[Vaskez]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
^^ok simple bit of wordplay not really surprising n a bit forced
Feeble's back to end your career.. I'm not being fucked with today
and sorry to disperse the rumors, but you're not good enough to be Lay
^^ok simple, not witty but effective
got an extension vs. nasdeey, n dropped less lines, it was ya finest moment
Biting spit's usernames.. you resort to bitchmoves to undermine opponents
^^wasnt feelin this and yeah I know Spit's undermine on RV
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews
^^again, hits, but simple
Here's some personals: I'm bad, You're dope, plus I'm hairy & Jewish
at least I won in RV's tag tourney without spitacular to carry me through it
^^not bad hit

hmm don't hate me feeble, but really you lacked wit in this battle, heh

vs.

i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
^^heh not bad
u've got no intelligence dude, but u'll live n' die for ya crew
so i'll make u go out on a limb, and make that Artificial too
^^nah played and badly worded
but now ur tryin new forums, in HOF ur gonna need more then luck
the reason no Member Pictures is cuz ur verses are wack as fuck
^^man where was the setup? This coulda been dope with a good setup leading us onto think about member pictures, this way it's just a simple bit of wordplay.

u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker
^^haha this was cool
as admin ur a bust, take u seriously? we know u suck
we're like ur concepts the way ur wordplays zero affect on us
^^aight-ish

yeah sorry feeble I got Auto taking this

v/Auto

[Automatic.]

3-3

[phlymo]

Beat you a couple weeks ago, now I'm busting & bruising
you must know a lot about LLL's tradition, when your so a custom to losing
^alright idea, a bit forced without the 'ed' imo, made it a little rough
Feeble's back to end your career.. I'm not being fucked with today
and sorry to disperse the rumors, but you're not good enough to be Lay
^fairly decent personal
got an extension vs. nasdeey, n dropped less lines, it was ya finest moment
Biting spit's usernames.. you resort to bitchmoves to undermine opponents
^nah
I'm not gonna lie.. You'll come on here, only posting sumthing to lose
Repping TNL & SC..well at least you're respected in one of ya crews
^ok, kinda bland
Here's some personals: I'm bad, You're dope, plus I'm hairy & Jewish
at least I won in RV's tag tourney without spitacular to carry me through it
^decent, pretty bland again though, funny set-up lol


vs


i'm movin on to the Final 4, cuz whore i've got a reason
but u can think of this as ur Final 4.. this entire season
^decent
u've got no intelligence dude, but u'll live n' die for ya crew
so i'll make u go out on a limb, and make that Artificial too
^alright, kinda bland to me, i dunno
but now ur tryin new forums, in HOF ur gonna need more then luck
the reason no Member Pictures is cuz ur verses are wack as fuck
^i agree with vas about the set-up, plus i used the same wordplay a while ago, but i still like the line
u aint a smooth talker, so step away u damn stalker
u'll bitch fight and leave Second quicker then jay walker
^this was funny
as admin ur a bust, take u seriously? we know u suck
we're like ur concepts the way ur wordplays zero affect on us
^not so much


hmm, close, but i think i have to go with auto. feebs was never really terrible, but it wasn't ever great either. wordplay was not as smooth as usual, and those personals were pretty bland. i only really enjoy personals when they're witty or super hard, these weren't really.

auto was alright, had a couple of dubious moments, but the jay line was funny and he was a little more creative, i just felt it more.

v/auto