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    The Art of Depravity



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    The Art of Depravity

    I’ve been inside your sanctuary; I’m the fiend inside your dreams;
    The monster of the darkest corners of your mind
    I am the leech that feeds upon your inner thoughts
    The insect living in your skin, indulging on your trepidation
    Tonight I emerge from the shadows of your home
    Your comfort’s blinded you; I’ve been inside you all along
    And now I will unveil the face that even God could fear
    The face you‘ll learn to love, the last face you will ever see
    I yearn to consume you; I want your virgin blood on my hands
    I feel your dread; there’s not a trace of hope left for you
    Panic has paralyzed you; your fear gives me the strength I need
    I watch you cower on your bed as you cry for salvation
    I see the hopelessness in your pale blue eyes
    I feel the quiver of your skin as I tie the ropes around your fragile wrists
    I hear your screams, torment muffled by a gagged mouth
    I smell your sweet aroma; I long to taste your supple flesh
    Devoid of sanity, driven by dark desire
    I cross the line that divides animal from man
    The dormant primal impulses, the beast residing in us all
    Hell, I am the animal in man
    I’ll first toy with what’s left of your dignity
    You cry for mercy, a pause for the inevitable
    The brutality of your battery goes on for an eternity
    Behold, a wingless angel, a forsaken mockery
    Your blood flowing from your head gives me satisfaction
    I strip your clothes, bare flesh and desires unto me
    And now I perform the ritual of your desecration
    Your wretched yells only excite my unrelenting joy.
    Penetration through the walls of purity
    What was a holy shrine is now equivalent to dirt
    I take such pleasure in my act of bestiality
    Inhuman and so vile, God’s temple now defiled
    Devoid of sanity, driven by dark desire
    I cross the line that divides animal from man
    The dormant primal impulses, the beast residing in us all
    Hell, I am the animal in man
    You have no face; you have no name
    You’re just a fucking tool that has already served its purpose
    I’ve no remorse; I have no compassion
    I have no emotion save for perverted joy
    Your life is in my hands, dependant of my mercy
    But I will grant you none, for dead maidens tell no tales
    You’ll just be another number, a faceless object of pity
    So keep your sweet lips shut, and take this awful secret to the grave.

    Last edited by Lucid.; September 2nd, 2006 at 11:20 PM

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    Nice...........you had good flow and your structure was pretty decent and i like the way u stayed on Topic with it

    Keep up the good Work

    Pe@ce

    You're not a directly new member to rb, you should know by now what is good and bad feed, this feed sucked, step your game up.
    -Poeta.
    Last edited by Poeta Demonio; June 30th, 2006 at 01:24 AM

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    Better Feed?

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    Wow, as I read this, it just got sicker and sicker, it was amazing, I think this is great poetry really talented and descripted, but wow, the vocabulary and the content of this piece was outstanding, and the way you described every motion, every line just brought a new imagination and a new thought, it was in, incredible detail, you kept me reading, and you kept me very interested, it was a very original topic, and you used it at its best, the entire piece was captivated in talent...this was a great piece, a great read too, I look forward to reading more om's/poetry by you...

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