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    pressure buildin

    So much shit in my head i gotta get it out
    i got deez lame niggas out back screamin what u be about
    purpously pushin my buttons but i aint no glutton 4 petty bullshit
    no time 2 waste no post and haste
    nigga wait till i confront u face 2 face.. u'll waste away right before me
    ur biggest mistake would be to ignore me
    im the biggest problem in cicero especialy when i hit da dro
    like popeye thats my spinage
    the reflection in the mirror is not my image
    im the menace to the little villiage that raid and pillage
    4 kicks ill extinguish ur existance in an instance
    da shit dat keeps me alive is my persitance 2 never die
    like da ny king im immortal ill overcome any task cordal like nas
    or ras kas but dats old skool im da new skool and my mike is my tool
    my mind is my weapon my life u try 2 threaten and u'll cease 2 exist
    ur a disease like clamidia and im the cure so i gotts 2 get ridd of ya
    i fear no man or god i can see through ur fasad ur a fake, a phony
    lookin at me nigga u dont know me ill merk u and ur homie
    so da next time u c me nigga just fuck of and leave me be

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    you got trsucture and flow no punches really or metaphors which for your delivery you kind of what you want build on that you aint garbage so you only need to work on it
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    upping,

    keept it up dude
    lyrically pieces - a.k.a. b.boi.pieces

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    uppin..appreciate all the comments

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    nice job, ok verse, you need ta elevate a bit though, you need creativty, and wording, you need muti's also, and oyu need imagry, you did ok for a newbie.

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