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Thread: The Streets is a Battlefield

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    The Streets is a Battlefield

    The Streets is a Battlefield
    Written by .:Shellz:. and Young D
    First verse = Shellz
    Second verse = Young D



    When you walkin da streets its like you walkin a jungle
    keep ya eyes open, keep to yaself n neva stumble
    its a battlefiled, and all you got is gun n ya kife
    n whateva else that can protect ya from losin ya life
    you gotta fight to survive, you gotta stick to ya crew
    you gotta watch eachothers back, n dat shit is da truth
    Bloods and Crips, North and South, East and West
    theres plenty of competition wen tryna be the best
    we all wanna rise to da top, there aint no question
    but as we fightin to do it, theres jus mass destruction
    it aint no different than bombimg countries for oil
    cuz in the end, we all fightin for riches and spoils
    but like most battles, u gotta fight for ya freedom
    or find yaself stripped of all ya rights and agreements
    you gotta work real hard..try to maintain ya composure
    cuz without it, you gonna fail in life as a street soldier

    The streets is a battlefield an untamed war site
    Niggas is rippin off track like a mother fuckin whore fight
    Its war right? So livin like a coward just wont suffice
    In the heat of the moment its hard enough to think once but twice
    Impossible....If you wanna keep your life
    Gotta learn to hold your own gotta learn to survive
    yeah the streets is cold and war is like ice
    Life is so chilling that even the sun cant ignite
    Both streets and war force you to learn how to fight
    Cept in war there aint none left so you gotta go right
    Streets and war are two-faced turn they back in an instance
    Aint no room for trust or you gets tricked like magicians
    Stand tall like a tree aint no hopes in bendin me
    streets and war got similarities like in both kill the enemy
    Both are alike in take advantages to rise up yourself
    Just like a battlefield the streets dont offer mercy or help
    NCred aka Cyrious

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    This collab was hot. I was feelin the whole concept. made me want to keep reading. the way you guys presented it was good. good structure. the way you put your words together was good. overall good drop to both. keep it up.I like both of your styles.

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    Thx fam much appreciated me and him will do more collabs like this each day..be on the lookout

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    yo shellz you saw mah OM ya'll wanna do one sometime next week together? all three of us. Yung D you can check mah OM. it's called Street Dreams. tell me if your interested or not.

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    Holy Shit this was dope man...this is like one of my favorite peices i read the whole time i've been on this site...wow is all i can really say....topic was tight and both verses were dope...

    Shellz- ya verse was tight man, i loved the flow of it and it made everything go together smoothly....rhymes were tight as well.....imagery was good and overall it was really dope...

    young d- ya verse was tight as well....flow was excellent.....and i loved the mutlies u had...rhymes were good and imagery was relaly good....overall i liked reading your verse as well..

    overall this peice was dope..two great writers coming together and forming this excellent drop....and to me this is sumthin i thought a famous rapper had wrote cuz it was dope....keep it up guyz

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    damn thx fam...its actually my first open mic but it came from the heart and it was about stuff that everybody can see and relate to...i really appreciate the feedback from you guys..very inspiring..if anybody wants to do pieces with us hit us up..Aim-Flipthescript05 .......Yahoo-YoungdTN.... Shellz....aim-Loon3yGoonOm3ga

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    this aint one of my favourites...
    but hella dope..fa show homies no hate or nuthin

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    The Rise And Fall Will Be My Death
    So As I Gasp For My Last Breath
    Put the Gage To My Chest
    i Gulp a Heep of Salayva In Distess
    Sound Of The Gun Cocked Wat's Next
    *Bang*
    Bullet Incarnates His Soul
    Burinin His Skin His Heart Turned Cold
    Dead In a Matter of Secounds
    MIND AND THE PEN
    Is the Greatest Weapon
    So Dont Use Gunz or Knives
    Do it If u Dont wanna Live a Life

    Made By Me

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    thx alot fam..much appreciated

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    yung d..heres some info..ask someone for a sig..homie..u need one..
    The Rise And Fall Will Be My Death
    So As I Gasp For My Last Breath
    Put the Gage To My Chest
    i Gulp a Heep of Salayva In Distess
    Sound Of The Gun Cocked Wat's Next
    *Bang*
    Bullet Incarnates His Soul
    Burinin His Skin His Heart Turned Cold
    Dead In a Matter of Secounds
    MIND AND THE PEN
    Is the Greatest Weapon
    So Dont Use Gunz or Knives
    Do it If u Dont wanna Live a Life

    Made By Me

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    Quote Originally Posted by Black Ninja
    yung d..heres some info..ask someone for a sig..homie..u need one..
    y u say this??do you make them?

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    yo al of yall thx for da feed..its appreciated n there will definnalty b more to come from us...be on da lookout for it..

    Det im down for dem collabs as well
    NCred aka Cyrious

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    the whole "streets is a battlefield" topic ive heard a million times but most hood type shit is like that...rymes were basic but the flow was structured and pretty consistant...no multies or wordplay really but overall it wasnt bad prolly better as a audio

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    uhuh ...thx for da feed....
    NCred aka Cyrious

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