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    First Drop, please peep this

    not my first drop ever but first to a rap forum, not my best shit, mostly ventin, gimme some feedback

    Man i swear somethins wrong internally
    I feel like everyones tryin to earn-on-me
    either that or kick dirt-on-me
    I dont even 'trust' this world cuz itll 'turn-on-me'
    I could try to change-the-reel
    it wont change-the-deals, made by entertainment,-still
    tradin marketability in exchange-for-skills,
    it doesnt fade me still
    I remain on point wit a nash-first-step
    I gotta nack-for-death
    attack while u still gasp for breath
    cuz im tired of these cats sayin they gonna flash-techs
    then the beef start and they 'bounce' like bad-checks
    so without further adue-time
    let me introduce-my, Italian tapdance
    ya whole crew get shoe-shined
    you kids are better off pickin out some casket-carpet
    I scar quick, slice ya throat wit a slash-guitar-pick
    and fuck a drive-by, my gats-get-car-sick.

    alright lemme get some feedback.

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    oh i just realized i fukked up n didnt title this so if any mod sees this and closes it, at least comment on it.

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    I remain on point wit a nash-first-step
    I gotta nack-for-death
    attack while u still gasp for breath

    i liked those lines.... wunce i hit that line i started 2 get in 2 it n feel it.. wit tha flow tha multies everything about it...... i liked this shit n keep it up kid...
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