Lurv At First Sight...

[EyeCandy]

LAYDEEE SNYPAH
Daydreamin at u from a distance, Could this be lurv at first sight?
Should i come up 2 u in an instant? or another regret in this cursed life?
I jus feel everything u do bway, right now u got my heart beatin fast
Oh.... comes another mami by your side, Now i can’t be seein that
My feelin’s pushin 2 get outa me, like a mother givin a kid birth
But bway honestly i gotta admit ur gurl Kissin u.... did hurt
Thee only way i can ever express my feelins is thru pen n paper
I don’t choose who i fall for but Compared 2 other men u greater
U gimme butterflies, watchin u right now gives me pain But pleasure
Individual gutter guy, fa real have i gone insane..? But i treasure...
Every moment lookin at u as i kno we will never make it as “One”
& yeah facing tha truth is tha hardest.. atleast i don’t fake it like some

A year has gone by now, i’m wit a man & ur memories ent faded
Bway i picture U wen i’m wit him, Not a single moment shaded
& it can’t ever be raded, ‘fore u are never degraded,
even though “we” never made it, ur stil in my heart only a change 2 it
baby wen is that day wen u come in 2 my life & u burst lights?
What if seein u again is in my dreams only, now that Hurts right?
I was confused at tha time, but now i kno it was lurv at first sight
But we ent ever gonna see each other.............................................
.................................................. ..............now thats my Worst fright



D$S
do you believe in love at first sight,i do im seeing it right now
watching you from a distance, want to talk to u but how
theres another man by your side blocking my attemps
undressin u wit my eyes, wantin ur sexy body i must admit
the girl of my dreams 10ft away from me
tryin to get ur attention why wnt u notice me
ur long brown hair compliments ur face
loving ur caramel complexion,can i have a taste
ur loves going to waist while ur wit that clown
havin visions of u at my crib layin u down,show u howa real man gets down
lay u on ur back legs open to me
my eyes are locked on u,urs are looking back at me
wakin up from this day dream ur no where in site
i just lost my chance at the love of my life
i see u out of the corner of my eye
ur by urself and i wonder why
when i make my way up to u, u stare and smile
askin u if i could sit with u for awhile
i looked at u and u looked back,we knew it felt right
now im in love so call it love at first sight

[EyeCandy]

links are comin up!

[Poeta Demonio]

I actually liked this peice, rather creative, wth some good imagery and feeling to it, when i saw the topic i was kind of down hearted as i assumed it was gonna be the same old junk cha know:

'it was love at first site...
But in the bed she bites...
never ever fights...'

Damn pisses me off, but this was different i enjoyed it rather alot, well done, i would like to see kore topical from you, you have alot of potential, and some great creativity there girl.

Good stuff.

Feed on my poem entitled 'crying in the chapel'... thank you very much sweety.

[Da$treetzSon]

ayo put our verses in diff colors so they know which is yours and mine

[EyeCandy]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281374

link 1..

[EyeCandy]

ayo put our verses in diff colors so they know which is yours and mine

aiite hunny

[juvi]

I was digging this peice. You had good structure, flow and imagry.
You stayed on topic and dropped your shit well. keep this stuff up.

[EyeCandy]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281338

^^^link 2


& Juvi if u ent gonna leave decent feed then don't bother postin.. feel me.. 1!

[EyeCandy]

I actually liked this peice, rather creative, wth some good imagery and feeling to it, when i saw the topic i was kind of down hearted as i assumed it was gonna be the same old junk cha know:

'it was love at first site...
But in the bed she bites...
never ever fights...'

Damn pisses me off, but this was different i enjoyed it rather alot, well done, i would like to see kore topical from you, you have alot of potential, and some great creativity there girl.

Good stuff.

Feed on my poem entitled 'crying in the chapel'... thank you very much sweety.

thanx verbal.. but 1. thing i didnt write the second verse..
i will check out ur o.m inabit..

[Da$treetzSon]

uppity up up

[Poeta Demonio]

Well either way i enjoyed both...

And don't be so damn rude, feed muh fuckers lol.

Word thank you.

[..:D.Realist:..]

i think i speak for every one here when i say that is fuckin good man,,,but then again we no wat to exspect from you u never seem to suprise us anymore lol keep it up...

[EyeCandy]

U ent tha realist mayne.. u tha fakest! lol
wdf at tha feed...

& verbal :thumbsup:

[big j da fat boy]

this was a unique piece. i liked every thang about it an you guys did ya thang on it. lady had like the emotional part of it an her verse flowed very well. an DA$ had like the more intent to talk to who he was feelin. he had great flow an emotion too but you both did ya thang an just keep at it an lady when you gonna do out collab ma. peace out ya'll

[Da$treetzSon]

thanks for the feed everyone