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  1. February 22nd, 2006, 11:30 AM #1
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    Is it all worth it please decypher hatred to this witherd nation
    hiding from the all incompentent answers i refuse to be facin
    i promise.. that im truley trying to live and i am trying to listin
    transplanting cruiosity glands within us like countless incisions
    forshadowing and metophoric clouds keeps me from decisions
    but i'll leave the tender and young beings as guardians of fate
    my notions is that the angles are here but deamons are to great
    so please break down and explain this bitch that we name life
    blank rooms and those halls of wonder the only thing in sight
    you cant act like u no by starrin deep into the pupils of my eyes
    and if theres no god or nuttin up there why do i glare at skys
    i once more glance toward the sky but fog continues to swirl
    i stand alone on a empty barren thoughtless consumed world
    no not literally but every now and then thats just how i feels
    we shoud have their own cemetetary for the lives we steels
    damn i wish this all could end it aint worth my all my question
    keep pressin...lies have all settled in, in my brain they nestin
    the region i lie within keeps the ground shape shifting or not
    what i mean is im hallusiaitin naw to many times was sought
    so i painted a masterpeice of questions on a scripture of text
    so many lives stolen and people dissaperead..damn whos next
    so now im gettin paranoid bein conspired oh no not against me
    the ghostly pressence of an outsider thats mind of transparcy
    meaning my moat of sourounding waters clears a new surface
    the questions of life amount to one and only is life all worth it
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  2. February 22nd, 2006, 11:31 AM #2
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    uppin some feed on this one
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  3. February 22nd, 2006, 11:32 AM #3
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    for links hold on a sec
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  4. February 22nd, 2006, 11:35 AM #4
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=273713
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...19#post4007919
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  5. February 22nd, 2006, 07:05 PM #5
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    leave some feed plz
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  6. February 23rd, 2006, 10:29 AM #6
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    cmon leave feed
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  7. February 23rd, 2006, 01:16 PM #7
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    yeah this is cool fosho.. ill flow.. worded pretty well...some nice multies..

    some cool imageries as well.. maybe a bit of punctuation, - would of directed the flow a bit more in certain lines, or showed natural pauses..

    good writing still..
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  8. February 23rd, 2006, 03:29 PM #8
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    Quote Originally Posted by NiNjah Red
    yeah this is cool fosho.. ill flow.. worded pretty well...some nice multies..

    some cool imageries as well.. maybe a bit of punctuation, - would of directed the flow a bit more in certain lines, or showed natural pauses..

    good writing still..
    stay1

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    tht sums it up basicly
    this ws a gd drop
    keep @ it
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  9. February 23rd, 2006, 05:02 PM #9
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    your 13? wow that was a very good piece. keep up with it and keep usin more complex words each time, n more complex wordplay also. keep writing!!

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  10. February 24th, 2006, 03:45 PM #10
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    srry been away but thx to all and yea marshall im 13 uppin some more feed
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  11. February 24th, 2006, 06:04 PM #11
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    feed cmon just leave feed
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  12. February 24th, 2006, 06:06 PM #12
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    how do u start battles im new
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  13. February 24th, 2006, 06:07 PM #13
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    hmmm 13 dam thats good shiit.. i liked ya wordin however vocab was an issue in this.. but i understand cah ur age.. but yeah this piece had imagery & some very good multies 2.. keep that shiit coming!...1
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  14. February 24th, 2006, 06:08 PM #14
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    thx uppin some more feed and yo christ this is not the right place go to bitch slapped to get into a battle then to front lines to post ya verse but dont ask more questions bout battles in om
    hit up these om's wit some feed

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  15. February 24th, 2006, 06:11 PM #15
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    Quote Originally Posted by christ
    how do u start battles im new
    go 2 FL
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