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    Inner Anguish

    It started out with just little things
    Was all about the edrenaline and rush
    Wasnt til later i found out hope brings
    Nothing but shit you have to keep hush
    Feelin shady around all my family and friends
    Hit the teens and thats when i started heavy
    Acted fake around everyone and tryed to pretend
    That i would have no conciquences for it in the end

    We started out with just all the simple stuff
    One night i remember when it got real rough
    They came home in the middle of the job see
    And i knew the fall was bound to all hit me

    Got out and went right back to workin the block
    Did this house the last thing i grabed was an xbox
    And when i saw the blues i knew our time was bought
    Stuck wondering how we could have gotten caught

    Turned eighteen and had spent two years in the pen
    Had been out for six weeks and went right back in
    Because someone rated, But wait wasnt he my friend?

    So now im sitting here writing this, at twenty years old
    With my mind gettin old, and as everything else turns cold
    I wonder if ten years is right for my story to finally be told

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    dude this was nice bro i seriously love the emotion man, u had average voabulary, and a pretty decent imagery, but the emotion and rhyme scheme is what i liked most about the peace i can really relate man...
    btw is this fact or fiction?
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    This would be fact.... just had court today and they gave me an extension til april 25th because mine was the only felony charge that day so they had to give me an extension and they gave me this thing called a discovery and it got all the information they got against me and will use against me in trial and all the witness statements even the one from this nigga that supposed to be my boy but yet he ratted me out with the quickness

    but yeah thanks for the feedback fam its always appriciated... wrote this in like 25 minutes after talking to sharp so i thought i'd put alittle feeling into a piece this time so i took an extra 5 minutes and wrote some true life shit

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    true....werdness to that goodshit man
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    dopeness... thanks

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    Upp Upp Yup

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