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Thread: It aint all Roses...(real rap)

  1. February 10th, 2006, 10:58 AM #1
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    It aint all Roses...(real rap)

    its da crime family, stay choppin those Columbia keys
    the cream monopoly, milkin cows dry, sippin sangria wit cheese
    marksman’s skill tweaked tight, tension’s at critical point
    spit blessed like spiritual mics, sparkin flint on this lyrical joint
    supreme steamroller, yo I’m the cannon machine holder
    lay low like sofas; competitor’s jus got mo pop than Cream Sodas
    Sosa told us to prop profits… and respect fidelity
    Prison conspiracy killed the last don… still he left his legacy
    Traitors get surgery; check the infirmary for roaches
    the wrath’s ferocious, got CIA combing scenery for culprits
    Eliminate adversaries, 2 barrel’s focused to maim
    out of state mercenaries so swift u’ll never notice they came
    fuck who ran ya ends b4 me, I’m hungry n that means beef
    so fuck you middlemen, ima bring heat direct to ya teams chief
    n ya best believe if we clash it aint all gonna be roses
    mo drams Dan showbiz, ill turn the sea red den split it like Moses
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  2. February 10th, 2006, 11:08 AM #2
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    lol...dis shit funny cause i actually liked this shit jo. Shit flowed nice even thought structure could have been a little better, but on the real nice jo, dis shit was nice
    Close dis shit:

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  3. February 10th, 2006, 11:19 AM #3
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    safe bro.. i'm just gettin back to that real audio flow.. had enuff of droppin text pieces that dont work too well on track.. so yeah just flowin what comes to me naturaly
    gotta get me to the studio fosho...

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  4. February 10th, 2006, 11:29 AM #4
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=271444
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  5. February 10th, 2006, 01:27 PM #5
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  6. February 10th, 2006, 01:32 PM #6
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    yo dope ryhme...... check out "my first real drop" and let me know what ya thinks
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  7. February 10th, 2006, 01:46 PM #7
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    safe fo checkin it out.. feed could be a lil mo tho...neva mind

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  8. February 10th, 2006, 01:52 PM #8
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    yo that shit was sick, son...

    hope to see more dope shit like this in tha future...
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  9. February 11th, 2006, 04:07 AM #9
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    marksman’s skill tweaked tight, tension’s at critical point
    spit blessed like spiritual mics, sparkin flint on this lyrical joint

    Traitors get surgery; check the infirmary for roaches
    the wrath’s ferocious, got CIA combing scenery for culprits

    n ya best believe if we clash it aint all gonna be roses
    mo drams Dan showbiz, ill turn the sea red den split it like Moses

    ^All the best in the verse, homie.

    You kept it gangsta to the very last bit, which is good, you carried the topic through. Metaphors and some comparisions were simply great, and honestly, I didn't see a single thing that'd make me think 'yishhhhh, fucked up here'. Hence, one of the best drops I've seen so far.

    Keep it up.

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  10. February 11th, 2006, 04:18 AM #10
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    i really think you lacked content, vocabulary and a decent emotion.. i mean your set up was decent yet failed to reach a peak.. keep writing

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  11. February 11th, 2006, 04:49 AM #11
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    Yo Edicius, I disagree, man...

    The content was gangsta, that was the point, and he kept it well...

    Vocabulary? C'mon man, some lines were sick, you know it. "Reachin' a peak", depends what you consider as that peak. From my point of view, he kept the topic well and played with it althrough the drop.

    Peace.

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  12. February 11th, 2006, 04:52 AM #12
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    yea, but than he should record it, a topical isnt gangsta` and if it is.. than it wouldnt look like this.

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  13. February 11th, 2006, 10:00 AM #13
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    edicus is always negative with feed on rap flows...arent u a mod dude?

    2 da other bruvvaz yeah thanx 4 da lookout.. yeah i will record it.. this is actualy verse 2... i
    vocab is fine if u ask me ed.. ive written text only pieces.. n now am gettin back to what flows natural for audio.. every joint i write aint gotta b emotional...and evrything i spit wont please erybody...thats me

    i know this aint audio...but other day i wrote the 1st verse.. flow was patchy n someone pointed out the good parts..so its still beneficial to post my audio flows here
    b4 recordin

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  14. February 11th, 2006, 10:07 AM #14
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    Yeah read the ish...i agree with edicus on the things that ya need ta up ya vocab, spend more time on complexity.......however as ya doin it as an audio piece ya flow was good .......anyway, just keep tryin and poppin'

    Check this out, thanks
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=271537
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  15. February 11th, 2006, 10:33 AM #15
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    yeah safe.. my complexity was all in the flo0w and mettas tho.. and ive virtualy had enuff of text only pieces.. n im not exact;y just tryin pak... i'm about to record an album
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