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    reflection

    and if i could go back how could i right what ive done
    to many lives stolen to many ballads have been sung
    to many murder witnessess to many shots have rung
    why it gotta be this way im not sure not my desicion
    look to the skys for anwers but the clouds block my vision
    its like i got multipersonalities and they in full collision
    im confused and dazed which is wrong which is right
    im pushed down and ambushed the going aint light
    some how this scenerio is different it dont feel right
    cause my boyz said i died ago 6 years ago tonight
    but how could i be dead if im here in person now
    well my boy said i parshied from bein shot down
    the body was never to be resurected nor found
    and he begins to think that im an hallusination
    that he's only talkin to the baren wall he facin
    my hearst racin... then theres a blinding flash
    to learn from the future u gotta live in the past
    but yo all this shit and acusations just wat i get
    for the memories i select im witnessen the butterfly effect
    select... another memory and now im reminsissin
    my eyes open to black and white i start to listin
    and i relize that im on trail so to be in the prison
    guilty cries the judge dont ask myself the reason
    im givin up on myself to me its personal treason
    my boyz try and get a sentence wit me im cursin
    u get the worst deal but they the ones who hurtin
    why do my memories go back why am i so restricted
    but the scared past is revealed thats wats inflicted
    and i belive in wat i say so why dont i go and follow
    why do i always try and fill shit when my tips is hollow
    and i got another million questions i save it for tomorow

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...91#post3890991
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post3891015

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    yo uppin some feed on this one

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    aiight this was cool here flow was on n off tho. ya wordplay was decent n vocab as well. the story behind is wat i definitelt felt but u shud try n come deeper wit it. good shit tho.

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    pretty hot but ur flow drops off all over the place and it seemed like u jus went off the rhymes rly for ur story seems like it still cool thoughwhy it gotta be this way im not sure not my desicion
    look to the skys for anwers but the clouds block my vision fav line

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    yo thx uppin some more feed

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    cmon more feed

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    yo leave some feed on this already

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    hi
    ye that was felt
    good piece

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    cmon leave feed someone

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    i think ur concept was aiight but like they said, work on how it all flos 2gether.
    u def. got potential tho, so don't get me wrong, u new 2 this just like i--it'll all come 2gether.
    Keep postin' & return the favor plz...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270190

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    Immagery / content: pretty good immagery i could picture it all , concept was pretty good

    Flow: wordplay was good and and the way u rhymed words worked out great for you

    Vocab: vocab was good alot good words used in relate to the flow it was good but like lady dip said u coulda came depper with vocab

    Complexity: wasent really complex , there were some vocab used and immagery was good concept was decent


    Overall enjoyment:my overall enjoyment was pretty good , coulda came with more emotions and deeper feeling but it was ok



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