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JHull Checkstatz
Artifact
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I'm checkin in, when you check in I will drop a verse I guess since you didn't clarify, so I'ma drop a blind spit once you check....so check in!
a yo ill drop a vote wen yall dun iight
Checkin in...
Ill write my verse & post it up now...
Aiy0 Artifact you shouldn't have set up this battle your gonna get smacked...
I already know your flow is wack, so now I'll lean you back like Joey Crack...
I d0n't think this cl0wn understands that he's ab0ut t0 get slap'd...
You can't spit, all you do is hack like asthma attacks...
After you read this it'll fill up ya tear sacs...
Knowing tha only time y0u'll be number 0ne is with them Big Macs...
Its this rap you lack, now its built up like plaque...
N' you can't floss me baby I'll give you more bends(benz) than Mercedes...
You spit soo bitch, like a lady, it literally slays me...
Your gonna lose I can guarantee...
Leave you with nothin to say, like having no tongue n' no teeth...
I'm upper class, your not lower class but your definetly bourgeoisie, losin to me//
Man, i saw your bars, but i couldnt see the disses
Put it to the test & counted less punchlines than misses
My style & skill level is more developed-than-yours
Plus your writtens are 'dropped easy' like a skeletons-jaw
Tell me, why would i bother tryin to strive-with-your-spit
When the only thing you ever shook in your life-was-ya-dick
Son ill make-you-bleed, you look at my bars with fatal-greed
And the only balls you ever had were actually anal-beads
Just readin my verse will probly make this guy-panic
Coz he knows that i just 'snapped Hull in 2' like the 'Titanic'
Takin on this challenge is costin-you-bro
Just readin my verse will make 'J walk'...
... like 'dangerously crossin-a-road'
Wow....Just wow....
Artifact was real nice in this one. Better flow, punches and structure. I felt every punch, shit made me crack up. I aint sayin your not good JHull Checkstatz. But, you really need to elevate, that verse you dropped wouldve worked against someone who was less skilled, but definetley not artifact. Aight be easy homies
V/ Artifact
aiight nice feedback, keep it coming, uppin 1 lets get replies now
Thanks for votin...
Currently 1-0 me...
Uppin #1
Wow, this reached the bottom pretty quick...
Anyone wanna vote?
Uppin #2
aiy0 can you bustaz just vote on this for us or what? uppin # 2
Can we get some votes in this battle?
Uppin #3...
flow Art
metas JHull
punches Art
multies Art
Originality Art
Personals none
Wordplay Art
Art won
tha DIRTY DIRTY!!
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tha DIRTY DIRTY!!
ill skill make sure you post tha pole for ART, it wud be appreciated thx for your vote, uppin 3, lets get this closed up
Artifact-
decent punches and personals, overall an ok battle.....need some work on your struc but
vs
NOTHING
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