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Thread: Playin In The 'Hood

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    Playin In The 'Hood

    Yo
    Trying to make life the best it could possibly be
    But sometimes its hard to make people see
    the equality throughout the neighborhood
    In the rain and wind, i have stood
    Trying to make myself be understood
    when all the time im not doing no good
    cause the essence of hate is flowing through the hood
    Its like Trying to hammer a blunt nail into wood.

    When the niggas with they gats come out to play
    if you treasure your life better stay away
    Because when they get mad they like pirates on a bay
    to get their treasure they'll kill all in their way
    And when the violence is over, the sun rising up
    Blood on the streets, like in a vampires cup
    covered in the guilts and the hates of man
    Out of the fire in the frying pan

    But i aint one to preach, i know ive sinned
    but the past, ive left behind, the guilt, ive binned
    Many a man ive blown away, ive skinned
    Their mind and their anger, when the lights are dimmed
    And when i come out to play where the big boys play
    i use you and abuse you like an ash tray
    in order to get my way, i will slay, leave to decay
    Defining the new order, Setting the new way.
    ~Pause~
    So when the hood is out on the streets
    just remind them who they are
    ~pause~
    There not the emotionless ganstars
    Nor are they From afar
    ~pause~
    Their acepted into the community
    prejudice is no more
    ~pause~
    killings are a thing of the past
    Theres a chance for them to soar
    ~pause~

    Spread their wings, fly away
    Live to tell, another day
    live to live, another way
    live to die, another day
    cause we ganstars dont like to play.
    And the prejudice of the hood, will pay.

    Cheers for reading, leave feedback if you have time please
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    simple wordplay delivery was nice you stayed on point and delivered the message keep elivating your talent is becoming more and more obvious
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Cheers 'centz, uppin
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    good flow to it, it has some good metaphors, keep hustlin and working on your rhymes

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    you need 2 linkz to open mics you left feedback on
    ................or jhonny6foot wiil close this son.!!!

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    o yeah, fuck, forgot, doing it now..
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    liked it very much, keep it up man, the storytelling i thought was really good
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    that was okay
    i liked the wordplay u used
    the flow was okay
    OVERALL it was a okay piece
    6/10

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    Thanks everybody for the feedback, its really appreciated and im gonna bear all of it in mind
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    oh shit
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    u had good flo.. try to work onvocab a lil bit more.
    the topic was aight but try to add more interest to it next time. it was hot doe in some ways but in other ways i wasnt feelin what u dropped

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