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    How can I Reach Everyone for a moment?...




    How can I Reach Everyone for a moment?...

    How do I speak to the gangsters & the intellectuals in the same sentence?
    and what about sending my blessings to both the Muslims & the Christians?
    Wishing I could answer everybody’s questions on the real purpose of life
    what makes a hustling youngster hold a Colt45 tight close to his side?
    Who decides when and if you die? Does your existence lie in human hands?
    the bloody fingers of war that clutch weapons of destruction defending lands
    As arrogant clans clash 4 cash stacks I watch flashbacks in my minds-eye
    each day wisdoms grows a little like Bonsai looking at the sunshine sky
    I memorise ducking from federal officers looking for nuccaz 2 lock in boxes
    I’m sure Jesus walked with me for a moment way I drifted up n weightless
    Moved paces quick until the world seemed to flow slow emotional & mystic
    jailhouse rocking The Koran, feeling calm in Allah’s chastisement of wicked
    Only those spliffs had us lifted above the bar like 100 kilos on the bench
    getting hench like a brick shithouse I spit out the sic truth causing a stench
    Drenching my thoughts in a Hashish haze lost for days on cloud 11
    …… up 2 from 9, speaking in codes & signs… the mind ticks loud 24/7
    Will I reach Heaven as an Angel? Or will Hells gravity drag me down?
    I’m misguided mainly mostly… yet still I’ve never known exactly how

    Can’t even express my deepest depth in mere words, each attempt is futile
    I blast rhymes like loose cannons, feels like I been programmed to shoot wild
    ...Shotting yay was meant to be a sideline & a lot of cats’ favourite pastime
    …was piping ashes 2 ashes sprinkled with that dust 2 dust on the pipeline
    Hoes will live in your crib 4 a hit on a glass-dick n serve up head like a waitress
    u look here 4 scary images, but its not me! It’s your televisions that’s tasteless
    Masses of big tits n waist-less chicks stripping n shaking they asses 4 bucks
    c artists rated by bling, millionaire stars swear they career started wit drugz
    Does it all somehow - corrupt interrupt brainwaves perhaps lead a few astray?
    who cares what’s played, “am I good or bad? is as old a cliché as “who’s 2 say?

    I pray 4 all the parents raising children in this fiery furnace of an Earth
    hoping peace stops all war, saving soldiers enlisted 2 protect and serve
    Bombs crush territories, most political authorities seem gangster 2 me
    officially acting selfish 2 people languishing amid death & the tragedy
    …As each casualty - that the coffin sees is sent 6 deep into the soil
    AK47’s spitting in rhythm sending human blood seeping thru the oil
    Cities weak in turmoil, tempers boil the kettle explodes as heavy metal unloads
    the path is rough n rugged, got kids like fuck it life is stuck at the crossroads
    ... “Walking on thin ice” slipping thru the surface completely unidentified
    my solemn soul wandering over battlefields where tanks & guns epitomize...
    The rise of globalization facing the population blinded by subliminal psyche
    White collar criminal types flourish telling white lies I call it “original hype”


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    Last edited by The Vortex; January 24th, 2006 at 06:11 AM
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    dat waz ill

    dat waz long

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    that was really good..loved the opening and the topic..keep it up

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    great topic, wiked openin and endin...

    Can’t even express my deepest depth in mere words, each attempt is futile
    I blast rhymes like loose cannons, feels like I been programmed to shoot wild

    ^^^niice linez...

    u had good vocab thoroughout da whole piece and it was very effective...
    10/10 i'd say itz dope fa real....
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    wow 10/10... thanx 4 checkin it out yo
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    WOW you grasped the ponderous mind of most righteous people who attempt to accure the minds of most whom dont realize diversity is an essential. you have done so much with this including inspirring posing thequestion many ask but dontverbalize and then createda solution in your own terms. every factor was on point .brilliant
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    safe blud


    uppers
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    cough

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vortex
    wow 10/10... thanx 4 checkin it out yo
    lol.. nah on a real doe it wuz dope
    hope 2 read mo' from u
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    ^bless
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    This was qa good ass drop. Good topic, good use of vocabs, flow was there. Overall it was good keep it up

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    Your first link is to your own piece. Replace please.

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    oh yeah!..


    cough

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    that was long

    but dope verse

    keep up vor

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