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house rulz
check in due in 5 minutes
verse due 30 minutes after check
10 linz
house rulz
check in due in 5 minutes
verse due 30 minutes after check
check........ g/l
he tries to seem cool sayin he is hardcore cuz he smokes~alot
u freezin cold so he had a firman stand next to him to make him seem hot
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nigga fuck you try and keep up..nah you all outa time
and yea i can right lyrics like you
just by stretchin my (this part is only 2 linz) linz.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
let the rest of my story unfold it starts of with me leaving u dead cold
and niggaz only vote for ya cuz your verse is done up like dress codes
dont fuck dont play although ur verses are like luke pary
and ur barz gettin buryed in my brand new sig cementary
you aint neva had a girlfriend let alone had ya first kiss
ya no why they seen ya burnt hand from doing to much of this
blah i keyed this shit quick
i told u i was not checkin in no damn 5 min so u can get dis shit closed
u dont have to check just spit dam i spit first
i aint dqin noone
as soon as i get back i will drop iight i wont cheat u im bout to go get somethin to eat will proly be back 2morrow
yo i'll drop a vote wen barb drops,hit up my battle against pimpmickey
This Match Is A Shame, Lets Face The Facts - Ur Lame
Seems U Started yo Career Lost & Found n Forgot Half The Game
Dis battle is wack instead of a battle I should sit on yo head and shit
But dont beat yaself up over this loss....I plan to bury you under it
im like a water baloon on you cuz im about to just completely burst
Cuz if I wanted some “shit” from you......I’d just bite yo verse
He Aint That Bad Though... Nah Fuck It Lemme Be Real - He's Worse
His Career WAS Headed Off The ground n got stuck At Knees First
Leave This Fake G Dispersed... Damn It, Fuck, Shit, No Need To Curse
But I Had To Leave Some Elementary Swings To Compete With His Verses
ok this was a close battle and thats out of all honesty
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but seein as im gonna post in this thread a decision has to be made and im going to have to go with b on this one his punches hit harder tha lam's did also lam you fucked up your verse when you did this:
and yea i can right lyrics like you
just by stretchin my (this part is only 2 linz) linz.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
but other than that your verse was ok just tighten up the structer and that is for both of you just tighten that up a lil good battle to both of you
v/b
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This Match Is A Shame, Lets Face The Facts - Ur Lame
Seems U Started yo Career Lost & Found n Forgot Half The Game
Dis battle is wack instead of a battle I should sit on yo head and shit
But dont beat yaself up over this loss....I plan to bury you under it
im like a water baloon on you cuz im about to just completely burst
Cuz if I wanted some “shit” from you......I’d just bite yo verse
He Aint That Bad Though... Nah Fuck It Lemme Be Real - He's Worse
His Career WAS Headed Off The ground n got stuck At Knees First
Leave This Fake G Dispersed... Damn It, Fuck, Shit, No Need To Curse
But I Had To Leave Some Elementary Swings To Compete With His Verses
vs
dont fuck dont play although ur verses are like luke pary
and ur barz gettin buryed in my brand new sig cementary<---only decent line
v - barb...completely one sided
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please hit up the battle in my sig with an honest vote
thanx
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burburyin boo, u is killing not dick hoping just keeping it realOriginally Posted by LyricalyInclined
i would vote but i just joined
showing mad luv holla
Barb came with hard hittin punches an word-play was good.........
Lam you had a pretty good verse as well but my vote goes to barb he came harder......
Punches- Barb
Flow- Barb
Word-play- Barb
Structure- Both
Flow- Both........
Not Hatin Just Votin...........
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Flow: Tie (Both were on point)
Punches: Bar (Harder hittin... less simple)
Rhyme Scheme: Bar (More multis...)
Creativity: Bar (More complex... Lam was creative in places, but it was pretty basic)
Personals: Lam (Had a few... didnt see and from Bar)
Vote: Barburyin
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