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    The Final Stand

    The Final Stand

    What can be promised for the future except depression and negativity?
    Humanitys obsession with material possesions got us lackin' creativity
    Our wisdoms depleting, leaving us sitting ducks to any deciet
    So they drew their plans upon our minds and made themselves elite
    This happened years back, before even this world began
    Think about it blud? What was here before a man?
    Miniscule animals, do you believe we ascend from apes?
    Nah, im certain ET breeding created our bodily shapes
    Back to the point, our kind is blind, open to any attack
    You wake up one day to find that aliens have invaded our pack
    "Lock your doors and hide away, it's the best chance you'll stand"
    Fuck that shit, ive been waiting for this day, me n ma mans got it planned
    Let me spit you the lo-down, what ive been telling you all along
    The government dont really work for us, their agenda is all wrong
    What they want is an obidient crowd, something easy to contain
    And since we dont fight the crime on our mind, we're fairly easy to sustain
    Blind to the pain and financial strain which surrounds our everyday lives
    A capitalistic society means the poor man wont survive
    Is that right? According to the powers that be, yes
    A famous womans pregnant, front page material for the press
    Now a few people are edgy, catching up on government lies
    Another 9/11 is needed, with glowing fire in their eyes
    So as i said before, the aliens are here out of the blue
    While you scream and panic, we prepare coz we already knew
    Now im telling you the truth, the aliens control us, they're already here
    You really think im crazy? Well we'll find out in the next few years!


    Leave me feed and ill feed for you, simple...
    Safe

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    up...........

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    This was a nice read. Vocab was nice, concept has been used a lot, but if you make it dope then no one should complain. Good rhyme Scheme, structure and flow. Overall pretty good job.

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    Stop sleepin' n feed

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    yeah pretty gud yo... deep concepts thruout fosho...good structure and rhymes as well
    yeah the ish was tite

    on the real

    saty1

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