Grim85 Vs. Tae Profit

[Grim85]

10 or More Lines
Due in 30 mins
After Check in.

G'Luck

[Tae Profit]

check b4 verses - make dat 40min - and im down wit it

[Grim85]

Whatever you want lil nig' Check.

[tdogg3333]

hey when u guys gonna battle man im just tryin to get 100 post good luck both of u

[Tae Profit]

yea yea nigga check - i thought u ran away n shit - (there's a personal 4 u)

[Grim85]

We dont give a Fucking fuck! leave homo.

[tdogg3333]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260927


show me some love

[Grim85]

That was dirreted to that noob^

[Tae Profit]

lol - imma chec dat shit out lata yo - but post in a battle thread if u aint battlein or votin - ull get banned for dat shit

[Tae Profit]

dont post* - i meant to say, but neway - back to biz...40min dawg

[Grim85]

Worthless scum is whatcha is heres a tip quit rappin' man, stop it
I would give ya shit to sell, but you still wouldn't get tae wealthy profit*
Ya see im not bein' mean when i say this but im tossin' ya a L, Fetch
And fuck, i should take you'r sig cause the real correction is im the Best**
Text is not best for you switch to Topical, but fuck you lack at that too
S'why the shit you layed out in the OM forum aint gettin' no Love Boo
I would say you won ya battle by D/r's but nah that isnt very Coo'
Cause the last time i checked i saw ya D'rs Dick ride right off of YOU.
10 lines is enough to beat ya kid, my punches will leave ya thinkin'
And I'll just sit right at my Computer watchng how Ya punches aint Hittin'

*-Tae i made mean a
**-his sig says hes the best

There ya go, kid

[Tae Profit]

The grim reaper wanna see Tae-P die -
so watch...as 16 lines take out 85/
real quick - let me dig in this kid - splittin his wig -
leave him lookin like the nig in his sig/
ya no prob(lem) - so off - ya flow missin the mark -
no heart - so soft - u couldnt win if i lost/
Nigga u couldnt spit sick wit a fever -
Grim or dominator... - no - ya not either/
Please ya - no reaper -
n if u was.........
then i'd squeeze the - millimeter/
heat ya - leave ya - leakin - litaz(liters)-
.. turn ya fuckin hoody to a beater*/
so suck a dick - u aint seein me prick -
this nigga couldnt fuck wit me if we was g'in a bitch/
im slayin this cat - sparrin wit tae? - brace for the mat -
my punches straight dick - bitch - lay on ya back/

*the grim reaper wears a black hoody

[Tae Profit]

fuck - niggaz already pm'in me about the last line sooooooooo

last line explanation for u slo cats
follow me...
straight dick meaning hard - hard punches make a nigga lay on his back - n i was sayin take it like a bitch take dick - especially on her back - my favorite position - got it - good - tae uppin 1

[Grim85]

.1.

[DaChosen1]

nice battle

flow- Tae
meta- Tae
structure- couldnt decide
wordplay- Tae
punches-Tae

V /Tae

even though Tae won in all catgeories i still dont believe Grim was far behind. u not bad kid, just get some mo practice and try not rhyming easy words like Boo and You. those rhymes r just fillers.