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Thread: Africanized

  1. December 27th, 2005, 08:51 PM #1
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    Africanized

    We went from, odes and ballads, slave ships, and the highest plains
    To the tightest slang...hip styles, and the flyest chains
    The slightest pain that we speak of in this age of corruption
    Is nuthin compared to slaves that felt the rage of destruction
    From the masters of disaster.... attacks like malicious raptors
    The world was their show...we were religious actors
    A vicious factor to bear...the color of our skin, I swear
    Feels like ur naked when those envious eyes stare
    Hard labor no matter how rotten....ull never be forgotten
    whips lashed on ya backs...while fingers picked the cotton
    Cant u see it.... containment is harsh, sample a demo
    We're free?? Well some of us didn't get the memo
    I admit it...what happened back then...hard to forget it
    livin life as the "concrete"....so ask me "can I dig it"
    Beautiful culture from the corduroys, hats, and leatherboots
    The dances, the rhythm, silk shirts, and pleathersuits
    Cadillacs... afros, 8 tracks, our evolution was clear
    Our cool attitudes made our conclusion to fear
    No one felt us till they started watchin "roots"
    The struggle drove us insane.... so now its coppin loot
    Thats the trend...we migrated to black neighborhoods
    Projects...the name was too long so we named em "hoods"
    Used to be cool till the 80's came around it was shady
    Was "dog eat dog" world, so "bitch" equaled a "lady"
    A new revolution was formed...abusive and torn
    Invested our gift of rhythm and the music was born
    The heart beats of our ancestors pumped thru every race
    The whole world was Africanized...changes in every case
    Whites, Latins, and Japanese wore hats backwards and sagged
    Speakin "yo, word up, peace, and phat"
    Now look at the world...we got 10,000 eminems
    Wearin baggy clothes...shades and be speakin on the benjamins
    Preachin about rhythm... and livin like we livin and
    United on the trends... pumpin em up like adrenaline
    Amazing...we aint finished we just halfway thru
    Even the British and the Germans getting that way too
    Iraqis, Japs, Koreans, Canadians, and Hawaiians
    Connected and we united...the culture is now combining
    Us all...naturally evolving in races...embedded in
    Itll never end...peeps use it daily...dosin like its medicine
    Trust me when I say that everyone has black in the eyes
    This movement is alive.....I call it "africanized"
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  2. December 27th, 2005, 08:52 PM #2
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  3. December 27th, 2005, 09:20 PM #3
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  4. December 27th, 2005, 09:26 PM #4
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    yo this was a muh fuckin master peice an its true i mean ery body is usin the culture but it just reserverd for one cultur its like all music it every race that pulls it together an makes it what it is but you had real good flow an made it a good story
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  5. December 27th, 2005, 09:29 PM #5
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    thanks
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  6. December 27th, 2005, 09:50 PM #6
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    Beautiful culture from the corduroys, hats, and leatherboots
    The dances, the rhythm, silk shirts, and pleathersuits
    ^hah...I like that.

    The slightest pain that we speak of in this age of corruption
    Is nuthin compared to slaves that felt the rage of destruction
    ..deep..but at tha same time good multi..

    I am Africanized!!!!!

    I like it..dope...Ur structure was nice,made an eazy read..concept is on sum RBG shit..It would be dope as an audio...Can You do that?

    Over tha "They Schools Beat."..That'll be dope..

    9/10..cuz Im a bit Jealous..Holla at me on a collab..I like ur concept..DOPE..But Im D/R right now..so I'll leave it at that.
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  7. December 27th, 2005, 10:27 PM #7
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  8. December 28th, 2005, 12:29 AM #8
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  9. December 28th, 2005, 12:34 AM #9
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    Yea this was tight didnt see any flaws in it really,
    "Feels like ur naked when those envious eyes stare", liked that line alot, some wordplay which kinda mad it feel like a battle verse kinda threw it off, wish u didnt put qoutations around the words that u used as wordplay, but other then that this was great, good one liners...
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  10. December 28th, 2005, 12:37 AM #10
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    Just hit the OM in my sig
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  11. December 28th, 2005, 01:57 AM #11
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  12. December 28th, 2005, 02:04 AM #12
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    Very decent writing...I've NEVER seen anything out of you before and I must say that this drop was real impressive...many good points in the writing and decent structure going on...flow could've been broken down a little better, but you did fine. Real good shit here...keep dropping,

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  13. December 28th, 2005, 02:23 AM #13
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    this was some preet dope shit here.I really liked how you opened this piece cuz when I read it,it caught my eye to read it more.And espically alot of this is true I liked how you really opened your mind to this topic cuz it came out real good.but there were a couple strecthed lines though but thats no problem.And your emotion was real strong in this piece cuz I could really feel what was going on in this piece.And your structure was aight except for the stretched lines just shorten them a lil bit.And try to use some metaphors to it will make your piece better.and it was a real creative piece.kepp up the good work.hope to see more soon.

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  14. December 28th, 2005, 03:30 AM #14
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    i'm new here and this is the first i've read...good impression
    nice work here dawg...i believe lyracism is writing from your heart, and u did just that...nice concept...flow, rhymes, multies, everything was on point..can't wait to see more from ya...PEACE :hung:
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  15. December 28th, 2005, 06:51 AM #15
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    nice drop
    gd structure
    gd rhymin
    alrite flow
    gd concept
    keep @ it
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