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Thread: Metaphysical Motion

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    Post Metaphysical Motion

    Metaphysical Motion

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    I move this emotion in ink, linking lines to theory and proverbs
    Observing the universe, some souls crave progress only then grow worse
    Worst thing about being psycho is going off the rails on-occasion
    Each dawn deforms the imagination as piss spills in the basin
    And shit swills in the cesspit, wretched in this holocaustic torture
    Quantified by fate, lunacy leads one to follow a drastic-measure
    Antarctic weather immobilizes the heartstrings severs the cords
    I need to search sinister thoughts just so I can deliver the words
    Memoirs blurred stained in soreness, my shoulders are burden with bile
    Trekking miles to unearth a purpose that makes living worthwhile
    How can I smile? While the planet ridicules me as a contestant
    & Zig Ziglar couldn’t figure the riddle that triggers this impression
    Immense tense notion, open-psyche is twisted like spiral staircases
    Desires disappear to thin-air;-space is malformed, firewall flares -blazes
    With rare cases of obscure phrases, subject: to metaphor mindsets
    Game set-&-match to Satan if I ever trust and follow blind steps
    For the Devil is just a myth; still a Most High God I could deal with
    If only I could grasp the gift of being heard, then my words would lift
    I should live holistic “my instincts talk to me” sometimes I don’t listen
    Missing all vital signs, waiting for sun to shine, but skies won’t glisten.

    Examining dialogue… duelling with the understanding of God
    My prospects of winning akin to fanatics gambling lost odds
    Sods-law resents my presence, presenting exertions to essence
    Lessons I learn look like lies, wise-words falter in two seconds
    Kismet beckons back-of-beyond; long dissent has me weary
    Merely mortal, my thought portal keeps imagery mostly near me
    Pictures clearly emerging without pastel patches in chapters
    Craft composed fusing chaos with friction hit matches & lighters
    Ignite the spiritual-self; cultural health can help the cause flourish
    Moral fibre hungers more courage, beating on doors of knowledge.


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    cough cough.. see you later

    lolz


    hehe

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    Tight.. I don't got time to leave feed right now tho.

    Ill hit this up later,

    Eesy.

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    for real.. this is my deepi shit ..i spent a lil more time on

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    nice
    gd flow
    gd structure
    aight imagery
    gd rhymin
    keep @ it vortex

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    safe bro.. i'm high now.. on this hash n booze...lol
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    yes boss,
    i liked this alot, good flow, i know its not audio but u can tell u put alot of emotion into it just by the words, liked it
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    i'll have to say tis is very good......topic was interesting and pretty diferent...
    flow was smooth and strucutre was very even...made it an easy read.....
    I liked this peice homie....the rhymes were good and multies too.......
    vocab was complex in sum places other just gopopd................
    so overall this was very good keep it up....peace-

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~Skribble~
    vocab was complex in sum places other just gopopd................

    lol

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    Sup Nice Flow Nice Emotion and Good Soild wordplay i like da way u keep ya flow throughout da verse - wordplay was da most impressive nothing seemed rushed soild drop- Maybe a Collab Sometime-

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    Quote Originally Posted by Young_Block
    Sup Nice Flow Nice Emotion and Good Soild wordplay i like da way u keep ya flow throughout da verse - wordplay was da most impressive nothing seemed rushed soild drop- Maybe a Collab Sometime-

    safe bro good looks.. yea we can collab sometime soon

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