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  1. December 23rd, 2005, 06:24 PM #1
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    Pulse (Yes, i'm back)

    Just a quick 16 to paint a sick scene, enjoy it bitches.


    Pulse

    Like an artist without paint, i'm drawing a blank
    Caught in a trance, empty headed, boring the ranks
    Out of practise, letting loose some stuttering sylabbles
    Trying to move from spluttering rituals to uttering miracles
    Back on the pulse like heart monitors, regaining my status
    Insane in the matrix, bystanders are amazed that i made this
    Gaining momentum with iron bars and, now i've bent them
    Smashing through the guttersnipes, cronies and henchmen
    Let me remind you of events when, in the hall of fame
    I cleaned the trapestries i wove and searched for more to gain
    shot a ball of flame, burned those oaken doors to the ground
    and emerged a super saiyan with a roar and a pound
    of the strongest hallucinagenic to make the mind so hectic
    and deck dicks, so never sweat it, i can grant your deathwish
    i'm back on the pulse to make tracks to assault
    bring a smack to default cats who snap as a result




    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=259338

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=258832

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  2. December 23rd, 2005, 06:40 PM #2
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    Yay johnny's back......i havent read it yet but i can tell its short and sweet.........wow this was dope......the multis were everywere.....the topic is kinda played but u made the om and the reader yours.......you should have made this longer.......u put me in suspence when i ended readin it, hopefully u didnt mean to....meanie.......overall a very dope peice, ur very talented
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  3. December 23rd, 2005, 06:43 PM #3
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    yo this was fuckin dope all aspects of it period the flow the strutcure the ryme scheme everythin and if u made this longer it be even better
    leave feed on my om what happens next
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  4. December 24th, 2005, 03:16 AM #4
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    gd drop...kept my attention all the way thru...gd comeback piece
    flowed well
    gd structure
    gd rhymin thruout
    some imagery but didnt really need it

    keep @ it, 8.5/10



    can u comment on this drop
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=259521
    its my version on Backstabber by Eminem, the best i could do without biting
    much appreciate it
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  5. December 24th, 2005, 03:21 AM #5
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    WOW that was hella good
    welcome back
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  6. December 24th, 2005, 08:13 AM #6
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    damn....this was real dope....i was feelin every bit of this drop man.....you had good rhymes..mulites were good too.....flow was reallly smooth and strucutere was even..vocab was good too..topic was ionteresting...and i liked it.....my favorite lines were -
    Back on the pulse like heart monitors, regaining my status
    Insane in the matrix, bystanders are amazed that i made this

    good drop overall...peace-
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  7. December 24th, 2005, 08:49 AM #7
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    yeah well i'd say its decent..
    a bit short and undeveloped as a complete OM..
    but good poetic qyualities all the same..
    nice multies and play on words was good

    stay @

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  8. December 24th, 2005, 08:53 AM #8
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    Enjoyed the read, nice everything

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  9. December 24th, 2005, 01:22 PM #9
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    I think its an ok om.Not the best iv read from most of your oms but its ok.The multies like most of the time i read from you were good.Alot of those and the storyline was ok.Vocab was ok,and the structure was good.Seen a few topics like this yet this one was lil different.

    Welcome back man,and hope to see more.
    Also if you could answer this why isnt there any tryouts for Def Poets society?
    hurterrybody.
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  10. December 27th, 2005, 07:23 PM #10
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    Cheers for the feedback fella's, uppin this thing one time ^^

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