A Way With Words

[warchild]

This is the first verse ive wrote for a while its packed with loads of multies so i dont want any brats talking about flow cause its off the chain in this piece.
Also in the first 2 bars i mention a thing called a 'baby grow' if you dont know what that is, its what they dress babies in just thought id say in case you american guys dont get what a baby grow is lol.


I posses a Crazy Flow, Maybe So, let your Lady Know
Ive Killed Cats, with Ill Raps, since i was in my Baby Grow
My fellow mcs better be gratefull and say 'Bless This Silence'
Writing habits brutal my pens suing me for Domestic Violence
Witty Cat, doesnt hold a Gritty Gat as he walks the City Tracks
Just my Own Fists, own mind is where my Home Sits, Pity That
I am that nice call your label i'll happily Slaughter Your Roster
Your the biggest actor around why they give your Daughter The Oscar?
Do yourself a favour go back in time go get Hitler To Stab Me
Leave the rapping alone your styles deader than Mister Myaghi
Black Magic i mess around with so sometimes i give Life To Bones
I wanna battle my equal but God tells me to leave Christ Alone
I Attack Vandals, with Axe Handles, or maybe a Hedge Cutter
Im like a piece of shit in a deceased bums mouth im Dead Gutter
Its mad how the world is getting robbed yep these are Alarming Days
My insanity is too close to home like the murderer of Marving Gaye
I was a Savage Kid, trying to find out wheir the Cabbage Hid
My pen and pad constant liquor intake thats what Marriage Is
Arrogance is my speciality but Terror Wins Thats It
Im sicker than an aids victim whos also a Heroin Addict
Dark Immagery, Spark Symmetry, with these Atheist Flows
I ask myself all day long in a haze what Makes Me This Cold
You best run for your life when you hear this Thug Whispher
The devil and jesus are the same, jesus just had a Publisher
While you lie about Holding Gats, im Unfolding Facts, Exposing Cats
Who Lack Intelligence, what you Spat Is Negligence, Holding Back?

[EyeBite]

now this is dope.....flow was incredibly smoothh the whole time....strcuture was even just about perfect...topic was interesting...and i could imaine things in this cuz of you excelllnt vocab...multies werrre sick...rhymes were tight....overall this was like a 9.8/10..keep it up..peace

[The Vortex]

yea its pretty cool..decent flow n off da heezy multinations...had sum decent wordplays..mayb cudda been stronger on the wordplay tip, or maybe add in sum puns to give the lines some more effect.....i still say u shud hit up sum kats on frontlines..with those punches,,,i seen more aggressive flows from u b4..but this was good still

stay

[The Vortex]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=249045

hit that up yp^

[warchild]

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252072
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=251866

[-IsIs-]

Yo this was a dope piece man. the flow was on point for the entire drop. I liked the use of vocab that you were able to present here. The structure was evened up the entire way and the multies here were amazing, some EARLY eminem type shit. The concept here was dope, i loved the imagery and description in this, and the thoughts it makes you think about when you are reading it. fuckin awesome man.

-Peace

[lyr!cal m!racle]

you right my nigga. you really do have a way with words. everything about this om was pure tightness. if this is not your best then i wanna see your best. i would tell you what to improve on but there's nothing that i can think of. nice om my nigga. keep it up cuz aint no other om fuckin with this one.

[lyr!cal m!racle]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252324

leave feed on my om

[D. Jizzle.]

now this is dope.....flow was incredibly smoothh the whole time....strcuture was even just about perfect...topic was interesting...and i could imaine things in this cuz of you excelllnt vocab...multies werrre sick...rhymes were tight....overall this was like a 9.8/10..keep it up..peace

i agree this was so sick i aint seen better in a while

[warchild]

Appreciate the feed, uppin this.

[pyro2472]

this be one of the best om's ive seen dope peice straight up ill keep droppin

[Drunken Waffle]

Marvin Gaye is dead? =\ LET'S GET IT ON.

Anyway, pretty dope. Had some okay wordplay and of course the multis were good. The vocab was good for this type of drop. This was pretty good...I'd give it an 8/10. Not much I can say that others haven't addressed already. Not much you could've worked on except a bit more wordplay.

Dark Immagery, Spark Symmetry, with these Atheist Flows
I ask myself all day long in a haze what Makes Me This Cold

I found that to be one of the dopest lines.

[warchild]

Lol that Marvin gay line wasnt a diss to Marvin its a metaphor you need to read into that one to catch what i was saying. My shit is crazy you gotta read it in depth to get a lot of my stuff. Uppin.

[Eye`]

Shit, nice job. I enjoyed this peice also. Probably not the BEST i've seen from u, but probably the best i've seen this month besides K's "Happy Christmas" drop. the depth of emotion was pretty sick here, and your imagery made me shed a tear..*wipes tears*....anyways, i give this drop a 10/10 because of your capacity of complex rhymage and dopeness.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=252587
hit it foo...

[warchild]

Appreciate the feed, this was a strange piece for me to write i started it off as a punchline piece but then i switched it to some deeper stuff. Uppin.