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Thread: Supernaturals...ft. SyCo_187 & Psykosis

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    Supernaturals...ft. SyCo_187 & Psykosis

    DEF Reaper=Blue
    SyCo_187=Red
    Psykosis=Green


    The world isn't a place for earthly dwellers anymore
    People hidden in shrouds, in crowds, living next door
    Its more than most imagine, beyond contrasting belief
    Relief isn't in sight, we don't act now then we got beef
    Its sweet but bitter, the truth about those among us
    Soon they'll overpopulate, in the streets they'll overrun us
    Population growing humongous, they warned us that it would happen
    The ones we call "Freaks", behind locked doors and laughin'
    Clappin thier hands in joyus pleasure, imitating average humans
    Consumin' bodily flesh, loomin' in place that we're doomed in
    They're different than what we're used to, untraditional figures
    And fighting for civil rights and release, just like the niggers
    Its bigger than you and I, and noone can see a balance
    They're talent is inhumane, used for peace or used for violence
    I stay silent because you never know which one is listening
    Teeth glistening, and waiting for you to slip up and end up missing
    I'm tripping, but heed my words and please don't let them catch you
    Or you could end up like me...anointed a Supernatural


    At light speeds that made God’s head numb...I fled from the Red Sun
    I sneezed the Big Bang....leavin the Earths remains as bread crumbs
    I left my shadow in gray cocoons...to bathe in tombs engraved with runes
    And harness my powers in the Danger Room...I placed in Satans womb
    Birthed the Age of Doom with Adams palm and yellow bricks from the Land of Oz
    When evil reigns....the umbrella I summon becomes the hand of God
    Recitin poems of wars against swarms of Viking bones
    Feared cuz I meditate in lightning homes to the sounds of frightening moans
    With striking stones..... I crafted the suns power
    Spittin gunpowder I destroyed the galaxy just to rebuild it in one hour
    Usin my third eye as a radar I summoned the Gray Star in half a week
    I stand beneath while writin the 10 Commandments with my dragon’s teeth
    Metamorphed to my true form.....with a few orbs Id brew swarms
    Of newborns that grew horns and could split the moon with the force of two storms
    I battle wearin a cloak and a pair of shackles in a lair of jackals
    Scientists captured raw footage of me getting high with terodactyls
    With the strength of a bear that tackles my hands can move hell in a second
    I re-aligned the planets with the power of 1000 telekinetics


    *walks up to podium camera's flashing reporter's waving*
    morning all in presence there seems to have been a development
    Early this morning at 2am the N.S.A found mars had something adjacent

    reporter
    "adjacent sir?....do you mean a comet of some sort"

    president
    "no thomas we have sent the data to nasa and the comfirmed what we thought
    it seem's that said object was propelled by a fuel of some kind"

    reporter from the new york times
    "in other word's do you mean it's a ship
    *president interupts*
    "yes and it seem's to have been travelling for some time"

    president's P.A walk's up
    "apologise's to everyone but we will wrap this up it seem's
    like said revalation and the detail's may take some time to clean"

    president walk's off stage turn's to his P.A and say's
    "good work preston that seems to have detered them from the facts
    that these "supernaturals" have been here for alot longer then that
    preston get hold of general powell we need to discuss a course of action"
    Preton
    "will that distraction really work sir? cause the press seem to be gaining traction"

    President
    "preston for your's and the sake of the earth let's pray the public stay coward's
    cause a secret like our's would cause more problem's then we wanted"

    *as they walk off the president and preston dissapear*
    Death to All Comers..

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    this was sooo dope. def u had a tight verse good structure from all. also the imagery was sooo dope in this complex rhymes and it was detailed i saweverything and felt everything. syco ur verse was CRAZY with the multis evry line dam! psykosis i also loved ur verse the way u wrote like a story. this was real dope.

    keep it up crew.

    ~1~

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    it was a nice good.i like the way all yall did yall own thing.
    syco "With striking stones..... I crafted the suns power
    Spittin gunpowder I destroyed the galaxy just to rebuild it in one hour" nice muilts
    Psykosis good creativity i like the way you sit it up
    and def you got nice word play

    theres other stuff for all of you but i jus listed a few. keep up the good work and hope to see more

    see wut you think about this
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=251517
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    That was pretty dope man. i liked the flow of everyone in that. it was a dope collab straight up. The vocab was dope but could have minorly increased. and the structure was dope. I loved the little reporter verse to that was dope. very creative.

    Overall Collab.

    9.5/10

    DEF - 9.0/10
    Syco - 9.0/10
    psychosis - 9.0/10
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    THanks for the feed nigz...

    upping for some more...
    Death to All Comers..

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    Dope shit, liked the flow.First guy came smooth, maintained his structure.Syco came nicely indeed, more comlpex than the others.Last guy ok but kinda lost me, I think its just worded wrong. Nice though yall.

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    This piece was hella good. My favorite verse would have to be syco's. All of it was good though. I liked the way Def sort of opened it up. I dunno if he meant to write it like that but it seemed like that. Like he sumed it up totaly about what a supernatual iz and what this was talkin about. Psykosis's waz good too. Liked the style. Good job in here.

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    I loved this piece. Great vocab and flow. Psykosis was interesting and cool. Def did very good and was a good introduction. But what stood out to me the most was syco, his was amazing, it just went perfect and the chemistry of you guys worked very well. The flow and structure was great. Nothin much just that keep doin ya thing and Def can improve on some vocab but this was just great.

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