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    The Pyro: Trade Places

    Write Of Passage Piece


    As I begin my journey home..My insides burn alone
    While my outsides cold enuff to turn to stone
    Emotions so deep..a certain tone.. its like I need a boat to help me paddle
    By myself I travel..thinkin bout life and how my wealths unravelled
    Nice house..wife n kids..nice car..life is rich
    But its true that strife exists..and I aint the type to bitch
    One problem ignites a switch..my brains desire
    Im jus the same..a liar..obsessed with games of fire
    Flames are prior..to what should come first in life
    As I head to the gas station..another blood thirsty night

    Approach the house…what im about to create is amazing
    Games that im playin..minutes later its blazin
    Show no hate as I gaze in..death of an unsuitable youth
    Kid deserved it for fuckin my niece..what a beautiful truth
    Amends is born..my revenge was sworn
    I never go back on my word..now the end has dawned
    Alacahol effected worse..until you could no longer detect my words
    Thas about the last thing I remember..until the next I heard

    Woke up in pain..as i go to leave my bed
    I realize I cant.. im strapped in from my knees to head
    Please I beg..id rather not breathe, be dead, ..than cover this pain
    I hear my lovers name..read out..trouble became
    I turn my head to the side ..see my wife n child
    I dunno whas happenin..they coverd in burns..life is wild
    Doctors and police approach..as they see I’ve come around at last
    I fear last nights attack had gone wrong..and sorrows have drowned my laughs
    Quickly recovered...surived...unlike my kid n my lover
    Cared for’em like I did for my mother..now my fate was the decision of others

    I finally was fit for interview..the police came
    As that night lives in my mind like a freeze frame
    Guilt ridden..the truth is the only option to tell
    But by the time id told’em wha happened..i was thrown in a cell
    Meetin with pshychiatrists..soon an appointment wit court
    guilty was definate ..coz it was me who the evidence pointed towards
    Told’em I didnt burn my own home..and it was revenge for my sisters daughter
    That it was sumone elses house victim of the flames..there existence slaughterd
    Court didn’t believe me either..i was sentenced to death
    6 months later I sat there in that dreaded chair..no incentive was left

    After all id been told..id come to terms with the truth
    It was my own home..when I climbed and started burnin the roof
    My own wifes killer..I cant be forgiven for sins
    So evil…you cant understand how im livin within
    All of a sudden the electric chairs switched on..ppl laugh and applaud me
    As lifes drains away tho..my life passes before me
    My child hood to bein a father..respectable right?
    Now I sit here…simply rejected from life
    All of a sudden the end approaches..my wife stands
    I guess I killed the reason for my life..damn
    But sumtihns not right with this picture..on this night with no hope
    She got a petrol can and she don’t drive..a lighter..she don’t smoke


    the wife took vengenance upoin the pyromanic husband of hers
    the pyro remembered what he had done, but it was becoming a blur
    the police locked him up, not wifey? but evidence? no traces
    he pleaded innnocent, stared in to the juries empty faces
    but the wife had commited the captial sin..........................

    Trade Places

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    Taking out the intro was an improvement. Shame this is getting slept on. Uppin this for ya.

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    thanx

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