Drop Now [Due in 30 minutes]
16-20 barz
Tony Brown
Crazt
Drop Now [Due in 30 minutes]
16-20 barz
Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
bitch-azz. .
Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
fuck that, im not wastin that many lines on you. i'll go 12
look, i'll do this quick mayne, it won't even be a hassle
im known worldwide, bitch your not even know on rapbattles
Im way above your level, kid you aint even close to me
battlin me? your name dont lie, you really are Crazy T
If you did get serious, n really try to go somewhere far
Your rap career would be shorter than Smilez n Southstar
you really suck, i cant see how you compare yourself to Jigga
This ain't a Segregated Restaurant, i'll Serve this Nigga
Crazt lives in a dumpster, while i live in a fuckin palace
I would drop 20, but that's lines i could use 4 an actual challenge
This easy, i write punchlines while he writes fuckin love letters
You couldnt be dope even if you got like 10 times better
Call you 'United States,' 'cause you only spit 'good bars' with the 'stripes-on'//
If you 'President' of ya crew, you gon' be left 'Dead' with no 'rights'-on//
I'll place you inside a 'oven of lines' the way the 'skill-heats-you'//
You could be 'gay' watchin' 'straight' porn, and I'd still-'beat'-you!//
(The rack in an oven has lines on it...like a grill, sort of)
Like 'the drug,' I'll have people starin' at ya 'cross'-eyed like ya avatar 'to find-you'//
Attach ya 'brain to ya penis,' that way you can 'DO' anything you put your mind-to!!//
('the drug' - X...ecstacy...look...find)
I'll show you some 'condsideration,' the way I 'love' to punch-ya-'chest'//
I'll 'let you win' as an outfielder,' so you can say, "What's- the-'catch?'"//
(Chest=heart, heart=love...Catch as in price...there's a catch to everything!...everything else is self-explanitory)
I'll put "Blood in ya mouth,' like ya eatin' out a girl on her month, that wasn't late//
I'll 'pull you apart from you 'friends' to make you an official 'primate' //
You'd think you were a 'fly' rapper with 'filling,' the way I 'shew-fluff'//
Like the 'inside of an old teddy bear,' you never come up with 'new-stuff'//
You and I are not to be found together, the spectrum-sports-the-carings//
It's like ya did somethin' 'amazing,' 'cause ya rhymes are 'extra ordinary' //
(Extraordinary...extra oridinary..or there is nothin' special about them)
Call you 'unequal amounts of sleekness,' 'cause ya 'lotion-ain't-fair'//
You aren't 'battlin' fast,' 'cause ya 'e-motion'-ain't-there //
(Emotion...E as in internet..E-motion..movement)
As if I'm 'authenic,' my 'point's-realer'//
I'll tear appart ya 'skeleton,' to leave your 'joint's'-iller//
(doPe...get it? And if you have no skeleton..you're gonna be pretty sick...joints as in songs, also)
Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
fuck are you talkin about? drop ya verseOriginally Posted by Crazt
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Civil War on tha run! Blastin deady liars//
Me,General Grant, your stonewall ass gets blown by FRIENDLY FIRE//
look, i'll do this quick mayne, it won't even be a hassle
im known worldwide, bitch your not even know on rapbattles
Im way above your level, kid you aint even close to me
battlin me? your name dont lie, you really are Crazy T
If you did get serious, n really try to go somewhere far
Your rap career would be shorter than Smilez n Southstar
you really suck, i cant see how you compare yourself to Jigga
This ain't a Segregated Restaurant, i'll Serve this Nigga
Crazt lives in a dumpster, while i live in a fuckin palace
I would drop 20, but that's lines i could use 4 an actual challenge
This easy, i write punchlines while he writes fuckin love letters
You couldnt be dope even if you got like 10 times better
Vs
Nothing
Crazt you show potential and i like that,yet in this battle you didnt pull it off.Tony had this ez.He had a better overll verse in every aspect.
tony brown won this off top because he had punches and a better structure
look, i'll do this quick mayne, it won't even be a hassle
im known worldwide, bitch your not even know on rapbattles
Im way above your level, kid you aint even close to me
battlin me? your name dont lie, you really are Crazy T
If you did get serious, n really try to go somewhere far
Your rap career would be shorter than Smilez n Southstar
you really suck, i cant see how you compare yourself to Jigga
This ain't a Segregated Restaurant, i'll Serve this Nigga
Crazt lives in a dumpster, while i live in a fuckin palace
I would drop 20, but that's lines i could use 4 an actual challenge
This easy, i write punchlines while he writes fuckin love letters
You couldnt be dope even if you got like 10 times better
vs
nothin
tony brown gets my vote for one he came with harder punches and personals.Second he had a good structure and good use of his words too.And also he had a constint flow with his and it was real creative.The other guy had punches and personals but I felt that didn't hit as hard as tonys did.Also the other guy had a fucked up structure take those // marks out makes your structure look ugly.But after reading both versesTony Brown gets my vote
vote-tony brown
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thanks for the votes
uppin
vote ppl
stop bein lazy lol
uppin #4
stop sleepin
look, i'll do this quick mayne, it won't even be a hassle
im known worldwide, bitch your not even know on rapbattles
ok.
Im way above your level, kid you aint even close to me
battlin me? your name dont lie, you really are Crazy T
nah.
If you did get serious, n really try to go somewhere far
Your rap career would be shorter than Smilez n Southstar
ok.
you really suck, i cant see how you compare yourself to Jigga
This ain't a Segregated Restaurant, i'll Serve this Nigga
no.
Crazt lives in a dumpster, while i live in a fuckin palace
I would drop 20, but that's lines i could use 4 an actual challenge
decent.
This easy, i write punchlines while he writes fuckin love letters
You couldnt be dope even if you got like 10 times better.
lol.
vs.
nothing even close.
vote - Tony Brown for punching better with consistancy, some were decent, some were not hard, but def enough to say your whole verse owned him.
CrazT Breakdown...
Call you 'United States,' 'cause you only spit 'good bars' with the 'stripes-on'//
If you 'President' of ya crew, you gon' be left 'Dead' with no 'rights'-on//
You really Know how to dress up a below average punch..4/10
I'll place you inside a 'oven of lines' the way the 'skill-heats-you'//
You could be 'gay' watchin' 'straight' porn, and I'd still-'beat'-you!//
(The rack in an oven has lines on it...like a grill, sort of)
tha same as tha 1st bar...but really strange 2nd line...3.5/10
Like 'the drug,' I'll have people starin' at ya 'cross'-eyed like ya avatar 'to find-you'//
Attach ya 'brain to ya penis,' that way you can 'DO' anything you put your mind-to!!//
('the drug' - X...ecstacy...look...find)
Not really,but average....the structure is NICE!....5/10
I'll show you some 'condsideration,' the way I 'love' to punch-ya-'chest'//
I'll 'let you win' as an outfielder,' so you can say, "What's- the-'catch?'"//
(Chest=heart, heart=love...Catch as in price...there's a catch to everything!...everything else is self-explanitory)
again NICE structure..but awfull punch......didnt rhyme...3/10
I'll put "Blood in ya mouth,' like ya eatin' out a girl on her month, that wasn't late//
I'll 'pull you apart from you 'friends' to make you an official 'primate' //
This was okay.....weird but coo...I like it cuz its strabge an original..6.5/10
You'd think you were a 'fly' rapper with 'filling,' the way I 'shew-fluff'//
Like the 'inside of an old teddy bear,' you never come up with 'new-stuff'//
Its different,but really hard tah understand...so i give yah a 5/10.
You and I are not to be found together, the spectrum-sports-the-carings//
It's like ya did somethin' 'amazing,' 'cause ya rhymes are 'extra ordinary' //
(Extraordinary...extra oridinary..or there is nothin' special about them)
I like this 1..but tha wordplay has been used but you still pull it off nice..8/10
Call you 'unequal amounts of sleekness,' 'cause ya 'lotion-ain't-fair'//
You aren't 'battlin' fast,' 'cause ya 'e-motion'-ain't-there //
(Emotion...E as in internet..E-motion..movement)
Nice...9.5/10
As if I'm 'authenic,' my 'point's-realer'//
I'll tear appart ya 'skeleton,' to leave your 'joint's'-iller//
(doPe...get it? And if you have no skeleton..you're gonna be pretty sick...joints as in songs, also)
Its okay,It almost came off hard as nails,but I liked it none~The~less...6.5/10
Tony Brown breakdown...
look, i'll do this quick mayne, it won't even be a hassle
im known worldwide, bitch your not even know on rapbattles
This was aiight....but only close to average....4.5/10
Im way above your level, kid you aint even close to me
battlin me? your name dont lie, you really are Crazy T
Okay...again its aiight..really no punch...4/10
If you did get serious, n really try to go somewhere far
Your rap career would be shorter than Smilez n Southstar
Not feeling this one at all...1/10
you really suck, i cant see how you compare yourself to Jigga
This ain't a Segregated Restaurant, i'll Serve this Nigga
Nice!..Good punch...8/10
Crazt lives in a dumpster, while i live in a fuckin palace
I would drop 20, but that's lines i could use 4 an actual challenge
average,really no punch,just a filler..4.5/10
This easy, i write punchlines while he writes fuckin love letters
You couldnt be dope even if you got like 10 times better
Nope..not even close,but tha 1st line was coo..but bad ending tho..2/10
overall/=I felt crazt won this,Cuz Tony came real basic..with no punches that really landed..now on the other hand...Crazt had Nice structure,but bad punches at times..but he came with sum hard hittin 1's too..an tony had maybe 1....
V/=CrazT...No hate..Juss my vote.