Thor (1-0) vs. Renegade. (1-0)

[Lay Doubt.]

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

[Thor]

check
go 18 lines, u better make this shit dope


GL

[Philly B. Sparkz]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247485
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247379
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247385
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247389

[Thor]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...01&postcount=6
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&postcount=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...06&postcount=7
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&postcount=11

[Thor]

lmao, your going 20, know why?

u got NO chance this battle, my wrong? try ta' proove shit
they'll throw you in an asylum after you completely lose it
cuz failure runs through all of those veigns dude
ur blood samples barely pass the fuckin test tube
ur overated, straight boring, get ur concepts outa bed
i'de add you to my hit list, but your pretty much dead
please Ren, ur through, i wont even have to break a leg
you know its over, easy,
........................n' i aint even tell u how i like my eggs
ur so damn far of the map bitch, i make herbs cry to mom
n' cuz you wont EVER see my level, i installed an intercom
semi finals meant alot to ya, shit you prayed for winnin
i dont like to cuss, but I SWEAR God. couldnta' listened (Rex)
ur styles ugly, no1 would touch u! this battles mine, okay?
i'de tell you to kiss it goodbye, but it'd turn the other way
basic fuck, ya u elivated, but to a certain point, bitch
i should flush, and be able not to see the same ol' shit
get ur stupid rep outa my face, n' just sit down, please
if i thought you stood a chance,
.........................i wouldnta' asked u to take a seat^
humiliating u here, you thinking rematch? not at all bitch
u wont ever wana go a round again like retired alcoholics

*edited to put Cap Locks

[Ruthless.]

wow super early..

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Dood lied an said hes dope. Sorry kid but my word always stood
If honesty is the key to success - Then your locked out for good
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Doods @ 18 years. Yet his success wit bitches never rose
Girls call sex with u a rip off. While they beg me to rip off there clothes
But thats just how it goes. Just pack up N' leave instead
The leagues been Dyin to see me..While they'd much rather see u dead
Fuckin mommas boy. Go rest your head while da bitch sings
I made it to the playoffs. Your just forced to playoff the swings
Im in a class of kings. Beat me? nah fatass dont even try it
I find it hard not to brake laws..You just find it hard not to brake your diet
Just sit and keep quiet. I'll fuckin' knock off u prick
Jabs will have your stomach so Twizted. You'll decide to hop off his dick
Yeh. Dont denie that^. Tha kids basicly ur idle. Fuckin' clown
I would tell u to keep your head up. But u earned most profit with it down
Kid is weak as fuck. But bein' this bad how do u manage?
The day thor broke a record
..His grandpa smacked'em N' made him pay 4 the damage
I'd talkin shit if i said your pimp game was decent @ least
Cuz I got girls constantly beastin' me. While ur girl just looks like a beast!
known to blow things out of proportion. Cuz dood imma star of the nation
Thors punches have been used 237846x. An thats far from exaggeration

[Thor]

dope

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Im in 2 many leagues =/

G Luck

[Plexus]

get ur stupid rep outa my face, n' just sit down, please
if i thought you stood a chance,
.........................i wouldnta' asked u to take a seat^
humiliating u here, you thinking rematch? not at all bitch
u wont ever wana go a round again like retired alcoholics

vs

Just sit and keep quiet. I'll fuckin' knock off u prick
Jabs will have your stomach so Twizted. You'll decide to hop off his dick
Yeh. Dont denie that^. Tha kids basicly ur idle. Fuckin' clown
I would tell u to keep your head up. But u earned most profit with it down
known to blow things out of proportion. Cuz dood imma star of the nation
Thors punches have been used 237846x. An thats far from exaggeration


this was a pretty good battle....you both came a lil played in a few of your lines....but ren got this one for more qoutables as well as originality

v/ren

[Philly®]

ur so damn far of the map bitch, i make herbs cry to mom
n' cuz you wont EVER see my level, i installed an intercom
get ur stupid rep outa my face, n' just sit down, please
if i thought you stood a chance,
.........................i wouldnta' asked u to take a seat^
humiliating u here, you thinking rematch? not at all bitch
u wont ever wana go a round again like retired alcoholics

vs.

But thats just how it goes. Just pack up N' leave instead
The leagues been Dyin to see me..While they'd much rather see u dead
Fuckin mommas boy. Go rest your head while da bitch sings
I made it to the playoffs. Your just forced to playoff the swings
Just sit and keep quiet. I'll fuckin' knock off u prick
Jabs will have your stomach so Twizted. You'll decide to hop off his dick
Yeh. Dont denie that^. Tha kids basicly ur idle. Fuckin' clown
I would tell u to keep your head up. But u earned most profit with it down
Kid is weak as fuck. But bein' this bad how do u manage?
The day thor broke a record
..His grandpa smacked'em N' made him pay 4 the damage


this was a one sided battle really,.....thor was coo, but not consistant,.......renegade was consistant, but some of his lines was glory to him self, so i left them out,......but if i matched every punch rene had it hands down.......but this is just a opinion

V/renegade for more quotables and a better more conststant verse

[Trahedy Siphon]

Thor:
please Ren, ur through, i wont even have to break a leg
you know its over, easy,
........................n' i aint even tell u how i like my eggs

Renegade:
But thats just how it goes. Just pack up N' leave instead
The leagues been Dyin to see me..While they'd much rather see u dead
Just sit and keep quiet. I'll fuckin' knock off u prick
Jabs will have your stomach so Twizted. You'll decide to hop off his dick
^that there was good

Overall: Renegade easily took this. Thor's punches were
just way too basic. Renegade has some good punches but a lot
were hindered by poor wording. A lot of potential though, man.

Vote:Renegade

[kid sick]

get ur stupid rep outa my face, n' just sit down, please
if i thought you stood a chance,
.........................i wouldnta' asked u to take a seat^
humiliating u here, you thinking rematch? not at all bitch
u wont ever wana go a round again like retired alcoholics



vs

Just sit and keep quiet. I'll fuckin' knock off u prick
Jabs will have your stomach so Twizted. You'll decide to hop off his dick
Yeh. Dont denie that^. Tha kids basicly ur idle. Fuckin' clown
I would tell u to keep your head up. But u earned most profit with it down
known to blow things out of proportion. Cuz dood imma star of the nation
Thors punches have been used 237846x. An thats far from exaggeration

rens punches hit much harder and were better this battle was one sided.

v/ren

[Marvelous_]

get ur stupid rep outa my face, n' just sit down, please
if i thought you stood a chance,
.........................i wouldnta' asked u to take a seat^

vs.

Dood lied an said hes dope. Sorry kid but my word always stood
If honesty is the key to success - Then your locked out for good
Just sit and keep quiet. I'll fuckin' knock off u prick
Jabs will have your stomach so Twizted. You'll decide to hop off his dick

v/Ren

[TaK]

I think renegade took this, Thor was ok and had some good lines but not all of his verse seemed to stay consistent and his standout line to me was the "take a seat " line but besides that it wasnt a standout showing from and his flow was pretty choppy
I feel Renegade stayed more consistent had a smoother flow and more lines that i liked like "see u dead/Broken record/and the profit line". overall ima gonna have to

Vote - Renegade