flavin (1-0) vs. untold (1-0)

[Lay Doubt.]

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

[flavin]

check.......16 lines

Kontext vs. G.
phillycannons vs. WTf Man
Thor vs. Renegade.

[Untold.]

16? Whatever.

Czek.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...7&page=2&pp=15
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...16#post3430816
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...23#post3430823
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...38#post3430838

[flavin]

Been contemplating jokes so I could rip and whore a G
But then I read ur verse, and realized u did it for me
I think ive heard of u before, Im having these hunches
A Classic Huh? Wow, Good job reppin ur punches
Its funny, No one ever told me ur dope, name suits you
The only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
U a hypocrite? Trying to get up with a name like that
Fuck, u should become an undercover agent………..
…………………………..and follow ur concepts path
Take advice from ur poetry let suicide thoughts consume you
And trust me, ^^That’s not so I can win, That’s to help ur verses dude
Im expecting you to get more laughs then me, as a matter of fact
Now here, let me teach you the difference between with and at
Heres some advice kid cange ur name, I’ll call u the bird
Cuz you flying in a league of ur own, LLL the 3rd

edit: forgot a comma where i needed it to flow

[Untold.]

Get whored and stay in bed... Nigga, rest in peace
Tol Flav's bitch to get at me... He let her off her leash
Be deceased, your last battle was only won by luck
Flav's rollin as big mac, when hes under the truck
I'm a blaze this foo... Yea I'm burnin the joint
Flav ya life's like broken pencil tips...
... Theres really no point
Ya death's like The Fugees, softly kill'n you, G!
As for being well-endowed? Yea, Flav's hung...
But only when from a tree
Dawg, I'm get'n down and dirty just for the win
Just like when you got screw'd with that weed ...
...Your get'n fucked here again
Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^
Fag, you more harmless then a garden snake
Flav's got more of a false image than Artifake
So fuck it! I'm gonna go 16 just cause I can

Originally Posted by flavin
do u have a myspace???

Originally Posted by flavin
actually........thats not what i was going to use it for i was gonna add u to my friends....ive battles lots of people from here with myspaces and never used them in personals.....but wateva

And I knew you only had a life on the net...
But I didn't know the same went for your friends

I went 16... Most of the personals are links and the quotes are all real. Don't believe me, do your research. Also, don't get anything, either ask or don't vote. Good luck!

0ne.

[Thor]

he only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
good

vs

Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^
nice

Now really its the "Boots you" line vs the "history repeats itsself" line, They both are played, but the History line is a personal so V/Untold

Very difficult to choose, i was guna say Tie, but you would both get pissed to I just chose.

[TaK]

Flavin had a stronger flow to me and his opener and closer were ok but to me lacked punches that really connected though the boots lines did make me giggle a bit

untold to me hit harder with his lines as he used more punches even the concept behind them were old and he had some ok personals and the quotes were a nice touch because he actually used them in the verse so with that said im gonna have to

Vote - Untold

[Lurid]

flavin- solid verse , it sounded like u were dead serious and i could feel ur verse homie. u had good personals and dope punches , flo was there , vocab was decent , structure and creativity was there.

untold-no hate but it seemed like all ur punches were forced or played. the rhyme was too nursery , the creativity and structure was good tho


vt/flavin

[Ruthless.]

sorry nothing special. just decent but elevating

vs

I'm a blaze this foo... Yea I'm burnin the joint
Flav ya life's like broken pencil tips...
... Theres really no point
Fag, you more harmless then a garden snake
Flav's got more of a false image than Artifake

damn flav.. u post fake pics.?

v/told

[flavin]

damn flav.. u post fake pics.?

nope

[Hennessy.]

Flav
damn kid you didnt come hard enough.

VS
Untold
tight verse untold..shit was great , punches killed it.

vote untold

[Caesar Augustus]

Vote/untold

the links made his a stronger verse

[Philly B. Sparkz]

Wow.

No hate but this battle was weak. I found nothing quotable really. Flavin @ some points in his verse was stretched as fuck while Untold used gay links. Having links in a verse is gay as fuck you shouldn't need to bring up links to make punches unless its someones pic. I was expecting to see another decent/above average verse by Untold but, here it was pretty weak by both.

Its funny, No one ever told me ur dope, name suits you
The only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
^Closest thing I found to a quotable so..

v/ Flav

[Kontext]

Vote Untold


very clearly got this nice drop tho


Flav didn't come hard enuff

[Untold.]

nope

Yea... You do.