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    Life Lessons

    day 2 day --is a struggle that i'm constantly stressing
    another day on the grind -livin behind the present
    past experiences help me to learn my lessons
    so now i'm never second guessin my life when it threatend
    and a soon as its mentiond you can quickly feel the tension
    cuz if you cum for me then i'm facin a life sentence
    cuz i was thrown on the streets and raised to be a menace
    to this society that filled with the guilty in a wide variety
    people are always lookn for the realist and there always findin me
    cuz my words are so hard you couldnt even bite em with iron teeth
    it took awhile to get to the top but i never stopd for a sighn of relief
    i heard about religion and i'm really tryn to belive
    but when uv seen what i've seen than thats harder than it seems
    Never heard gods voice or had a martyr on my scene
    and i live my life Hard--and i've already surpassed my dreams
    i learned to stay quite even when i wanted to scream.
    got addicted to rapvideos and was stuck infront of the screen
    and when i got hungry--a life -- meant nothin to me
    no body wants me and plus in this life nothin is free

    to be cont.................
    as i grow older my words become colder
    so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder

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    as i grow older my words become colder
    so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder

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    thanx ny ways fag.............................................
    as i grow older my words become colder
    so i walk a str8 path and hope i dont need to look over my shoulder

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    Honestly I dont like it, but your on to something...The title caught and I thought it was gonna be deep, but it wasn't...the opening 2 lines were hot, but after that it lacked a lot of feel. I think if you go back through it get more descriptive and play things out then you can turn it into a good peice...
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