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Thread: Gangstas Cry To... (collab: Word.Play ft. Tech_9

  1. September 27th, 2005, 06:41 PM #1
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    Gangstas Cry To... (collab: Word.Play ft. Tech_9

    Ayo it's ta2_tears here wit my nigga tech... let sum deep shit out 4 y'all


    Tech_9=White
    Word.Play=Blue

    yo as the crime rate goes up my heart rate blows up
    bodies layin in the streets as there spirits float up(R.I.P. to my nigga's)
    we loosing the streets army people are lying dead
    and thoughts of losing my nigga's goin thru my head
    dats why i sit in my room listening to life goes on
    i know my nigga's are at da right side of da throne
    holden on to god's hand they are part of god's plan
    even though my people arn't famous i'm there # 1 fan
    this shit is sad though cause i feel dat i'm da 1 to blame
    but da lose of my fam i realized that life is not a game
    as i stay isolated in my room thinkin that my life is done
    i start drinkin a fifth of hen. cause i'm sad not just for fun
    poking the gun into my temple sad i lost my best friend
    he was the best friend i eva had best now and best then
    layin in my room lights out drowning in my own tears
    thinkin to myself i now know i have just found my fears
    i'll give you one death thats really some shit i can't stand
    and i just lost a loved one it's kinda hard for me to be a man
    and yea nigga's you know i got alot of nigga's to say bye to
    but that shit is just way to hard cause even gangstas cry too

    May 5th, I remember thoroughly, I woke early that mornin',
    The rain pourin', it happened so fast, then blast, no warnin',
    I'm still mournin' every mornin' my big brother's death,
    I remember, my mothers breath pressed my face as she wept,
    As we layed him to rest, may ninth at the grave site,
    I watched him die, how can i behave right, thats a grave sight,
    And i hope you found the great light, on the way ta thugs mansion,
    And I'm still standin strong while drugs and bloods expandin,
    And I'm demandin you to meet me again at those pearly gates,
    Shit ta see you and all my mates faces, I can hardly wait,
    And i can hardly take my mind off ya and the rest of my niggaz,
    5 o' the best of my niggaz, in 3 months layed to rest my niggaz,
    My supplies are my vest and tech, they say life is a test my niggaz,
    I guess im passin cuz im the only one left my niggaz,
    But sadly im weak to fight cuz of weeks of weepin, sleepless nights,
    Yet I keep my peeps alright and tho beef is tight i still speak my rights,
    Tears leave me wit a wet bed to go along wit my wrecked head,
    And just like tech said, R.I.P to all my niggaz I left dead,
    Once again a teardrop roll down my face from my eyes so sky blue,
    Cuz Tech and I r living proof that even gangstas cry to.....
    R.I.P A-C-E


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  2. September 27th, 2005, 07:06 PM #2
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    ....deep....


    feelings and emotions were on point as well as imagery.....vocab was at par and complexity was dope......both ya got some talent to bring to the table....i felt every line and can relate to this as well


    dope drop fellas

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  3. September 27th, 2005, 07:08 PM #3
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    thanx uppin for more feed

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  4. September 27th, 2005, 07:17 PM #4
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    this was a decent piece. deep emotions in diss 1. Note, watch the font and size,, this was hard as all hell to read!

    overall good piece
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  5. September 27th, 2005, 07:17 PM #5
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    Damn this is some deep shit from my niggas right here.It had a good storyline and real good emotion in this piece.Also yall had good wordplay and good structure too.And yall also had good imagry too.overall this was a good piece from both of you just keep up the good work.And wordplay,when you gonna have your verse ready for our collab homie just wondering.

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  6. September 27th, 2005, 07:20 PM #6
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    deep shit like the rhymes and wordplay and structure was perfect......keep droppin the dope shit....mabye we good colab some time (u kno who dis is lol)...

    the only problem i had wit this om is the writing to small lol my eyes fucked up
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  7. September 27th, 2005, 07:21 PM #7
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    i would fix the size of da words if i could but i can't and just so ya'll know the links i left feed on our in my sig

    uppin for feed

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  8. September 27th, 2005, 07:34 PM #8
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    There it's bigger thanx 4 da feed and i'll rtf in a sec...
    gotta eat brb lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by vafinest
    Damn this is some deep shit from my niggas right here.It had a good storyline and real good emotion in this piece.Also yall had good wordplay and good structure too.And yall also had good imagry too.overall this was a good piece from both of you just keep up the good work.And wordplay,when you gonna have your verse ready for our collab homie just wondering.
    LoL im workin on it... i got good stuff in there now... just cant figure out how 2 start it off lol... dont worry... gimme a day or 2.. r u done? pm it 2 me
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  10. September 27th, 2005, 07:49 PM #10
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    uppin for feed nigga's is sleepin on this

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  11. September 27th, 2005, 07:50 PM #11
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    even thhough my eyes burnin it was worth it cause that shit was like that every thing was right except the size i really admire both of yall attempt to talk about ya dead niggaz cause i couldnt do it cause i would of cried on the spot.
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  12. September 27th, 2005, 07:53 PM #12
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    i lost some ppl b4 but the thing is it happened so long ago that i don't remember who they are but i got alot of fam in prison like my dad and two of my uncles one in prison for life and the other one is still locked up i think he got hepetitis c and my other uncle got out like last year

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  13. September 27th, 2005, 07:56 PM #13
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    very nice fellas, Very deep, great stuff, lots of good wordplay and emotion, if the writing was bigger though lol, Keep doin ya thing
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    DAMN I DUN ALREADY MADE IT BIGGER! haha aight i'll upsize again...
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    ight it's big enuf now

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