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Thread: Inner Voiced-An Spartan and ADR Collab werd

  1. September 27th, 2005, 05:46 PM #1
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    Inner Voices-An Spartan and ADR Collab werd

    Inner Voices

    Spartan Navy
    ADR Black


    Meditating and Going Nuts and while My Mindz Craving
    Putting My hand on my Face While My fingers Ingraving
    Hearing a Thump From My Heart Beeping and It Stops
    Felt from The Knife was the Key and Then i Just Dropped

    stop~im in ya mind dont fight the feelin nor lifes temptations....
    lets face it~deaths pavement u cant replace it so paint the pic like wes craven...
    im satin~ya ear drums ring from the terms i speak and drives i desire...
    a none liar seekin revenge in a deadly form sickness is what i inspire

    Trying to,and Hearing Two Sides,from a fellow friend
    then The Other steped in and told me to Do it Again
    So I Tryed to recommend death and Give Honesty
    And Gave me a New time Sequel to My Dynasty

    first ressurect my mythology~follow me as we take the course thats behind ur mind..
    in due time we'll set aside crimes to watch heaven and hells battle collide..
    just to show u what that'll provide~im no longer a voice im an image...
    with no gimiks behold ur true limits let darkness fall overshadowing ur few spirits

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235547
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235651
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    To DAMN DOPE^^^




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  2. September 27th, 2005, 06:14 PM #2
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    ....I liked this and yalls other peice.......the thing i like about yall two peices is yall complex.....i can invison the shit yall talking bout...........yall were even in this one....yall both had nice lines and like i said a good peice.........keep it up .........btw......i liked Suicidal Thoughts better.........lol.....but really keep the good work.....
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  3. September 27th, 2005, 06:16 PM #3
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    lol if you liked Suicidal thoughts wait till this one that is coming we making another 3 way collab in a bit

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  4. September 27th, 2005, 06:18 PM #4
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    chea but Spartan u an alias???????
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  5. September 27th, 2005, 06:22 PM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by !.VeRbZ.!
    chea but Spartan u an alias???????

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  6. September 27th, 2005, 06:24 PM #6
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  7. September 27th, 2005, 06:43 PM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartan


    lol whats so funny...........u well known or something??????????............
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  8. September 27th, 2005, 06:46 PM #8
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    yes lol every one know me

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  9. September 27th, 2005, 06:58 PM #9
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    .....nuff guys....yea he's well known.....

    uppin can we get some feedback


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  10. September 27th, 2005, 07:51 PM #10
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    Pure... Dopness... that was an ill spit my niggaz... well put 2gether, rhyme scheme was good, wordplay was nice liked the multis in that, good message 2 it, Title suited the piece well... good ending 2 the piece aswell... also i liked the format u guys layed out... 4lines 4 lines 4lines etc. well done guys keep it up...

    Spartan try and pull off sum more multis tho... keep it up

    ADR i'd like 2 do a collab wit u sum time... so hit me up... pc

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  11. September 27th, 2005, 07:59 PM #11
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    Great drop, Very good wordplay, multis, all that was extremely well put together, I liked that one alot.
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  12. September 27th, 2005, 08:06 PM #12
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    ...werd word we can do that ...u got aim hit me up on damnfuqindykez....
    thanks for the feedback fam really appreciated

    uppin


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  13. September 27th, 2005, 08:13 PM #13
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  14. September 27th, 2005, 10:58 PM #14
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    ...ite no doubt then word ima get at u threw PM or some shyt so we can drop some ill shyt



    uppin for some feed back peepz


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  15. September 28th, 2005, 12:14 AM #15
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    ADR- good shit lol...I like your topical shit better than your battle verses...Topical stuff is where your strengths are..keep that shit up And I look forward to reading more...Your last verse was sort of force rhymed but it came pretty nice anyways...Good topic to write about...It's a simple topic and you helped turn the shit around good job...

    Spart- Heh...this was also very well written...enjoyed the whole complexity of it...you had great vocab and wordplays...Looks good...words good...fits in with its subject...keep dropping both of you...hott shit....Leave me some feed in my OM's Mmk?

    Peace yall...
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