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    Current event by vafinest

    CURRENT EVENT


    current events,that happened,with my boys gettin killed
    by the boys in blue,thats why I play the field
    wearing my red flag,kill any crip nigga
    cuz after last week,I'll never have my finger off the trigga
    we were walking down the street,it was quiet like a library
    then we saw a car turn around the corner,so we hid are comissary
    so we kept on walking,and the car creeped by
    and then they turned the corner,so we knew we had to fly
    so we turned on the next street,loading up our desert eagles
    thats when the war started,even though they had mad peoples
    bullets started soaring,me and my boy sweatin out pores of fear
    and I saw that my boy got shot,so I started raining tears
    didn't know what to do,and my heart started racing
    so I got one crab ass nigga,bullets hit him in his head and his face
    but I was still angry,cuz my boy was in ICU
    and the cops tryin to get me to snitch,but they know how gang members do
    so I sit in the hospital,waiting for my boys condition
    and they said he was dead,so I had to make a decsion
    go by myself to kill these crabs,cuz bloods don't back down
    or get my gang to do it,cuz they want the crown
    but that how it is,when you are a gangmember
    you can get killed any day,probably won't live to see december

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    Holy shit nice....Never seen a topical from you before...this is some hot shit...I've always seen you battle...never a topical...first one of yours I've ever read and I love you already man! lol (not gay..) lol, But seriously this made me feel like I was there....The war...the friend being shot...Had good emotion and seriousness to it...Nice shit dude..keep dropping it like it's hot homie....Peace

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    thanks for the feedback homie

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    nice drop va...................i really felt that shyt man...........now i kno what u mean by putting felling behind ur peices...............we gotta collab hommie cuz i think i kno how to do this shyt now...............but this was a good read.............was it tru?
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    yeah its true my nigga thanks for the feedback

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    uppin for more feedback

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    man das some hot shit u droped u hit my verse so im hiting ur shit back you have some good shit going for ya homie hopin i could drop like u one day

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    thanks for the feedback

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    hmm, this was ok i guess, could have put it together a bit better so it had more impact, but the actual content didnt impress me at all, all this killing, gun shit is fucked up, a waste of time... id get a new hobby, write about something that doesnt involve violence cos its not clever its just dumb if you ask me... your style of writing isnt bad though, just your choice of writing
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    I liked this piece, the message was negative but you dropped a positive message in the last couplet that kinda made the piece better.
    You told the story well it was very detailed so i'll give you props for that.
    There was good emotion in the piece kind of introspective too i like these types of pieces, you dont overuse your vocab which is also a plus point.
    The only thing i could criticise is the flow up that so you can mix in some multies and internals it'll make your pieces stand out a bit more.

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    once again my nigga va killed it wit another dope open mic........structure was nice rhymes were dope cuz u made it like a story and the best part of it is its all true...that puts more feeling and make me like it more........
    so far almost died for them and this 1 my favorite keep that hot shit up...u already kno
    im dope.
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    this is some hot shit probably the best i've seen from you good job yo keep the OM'S coming

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