i'd like ya'll to bare in mind that this is my first ever poem so as much feed as possible would be very much appreciated thankz
lonely kid subsided
forgotten without mention
anger build's frustration
but still no attention
other's pushin the boundry's
adding to my soul's misery
lost within my thinking
now not even i can find me
dont understand my problem's
they just jump to conclusion's
friend's seem so distantant
i guess i made em' to lose em'
my hope's and dream's die
the moment day break's
as i enter the real world
in which my soul excistance is a mistake
it seems no one see's me
but im away's touched
passing through my insecurities
into something i want so much
i have no commoditie's
im a soul without a body
suicide would seem so sweet
if i wasnt dead already